First 4 chapters were great. Not a fan of the rest

I'm gonna be brutally honest here, this went on too long. Or it went in the wrong direction somewhere in the middle. The first 5 chapters were perfect. Amazing. Great. Awesome. Beautiful. Whatever you want to call it. But after that, wth the school mission and all, it kinda ruined it. You either should have ended it thee and had the school mission be a sequel. OR you should have went in a different direction. Cause that was not something that fit with the story. But the first part was so amazing, if I had to rate the story as a whole, I'd give it a 8.5/10

This has gotta be the best Spitfire fanfiction out there!

He asks her for daring advice, she says yes. He asks her how to ask out a girl, and she is surprised. That is dumb.

At the end I was smirking .

My favorite part was the teddy bear the was the cutest thing of ALL TIME!

I love this series, and as soon as I found it I couldn't stop reading it until I finished it. You're amazing!

I'm happy that you finally finished it, and wow...I know the feeling about having the mob on your butt. The leader of mine sleeps in the same room as me, she's my sister! LOL great job.

Please update you're killing me

Damn you! Would it have killed you to finish? I'm now going to cry in a hole

Please make a sequil

Hey Hezpeller! I love your work and seriously can't wait to read more of this fanfic. Please do some justice to these characters and upload more chapters :) Hats off to you!

it was excelent

Ummm I'd really like you to finish

I know it's been a long time since the last time you wrote but I want to tell you that you still have readers and I love your story but please please please please write an ending to the story if you read this please, I beg you write an end