Rashel is my favourite storyline out of the night world and this recoginition of how badass she is is much appreciated! Already hooked on this storyline PLEASE keep writing!

Girl you gotta finish this story, please. It's amazing, one of the best I've read on here. The plotline is just wow, just as good as any LJ smith book. Continue, make my life and just finish please

Amaizing, please update soon :)

Nice idea so far and I hope there is more soon as I am enjoying reading your story.

is it really true that Rashel's dad was a shifter? I don't recall anything like that in the stories...

This amazing story is back! Please continue, I loved this story, still do.

I'm glad you're continuing this story, it was always one of my favorites on here. There's rarely any decent Rashel and Quinn stories on here, so I hope you finish this. I really find this concept interesting. Update!

Please update!

Please carry on, please!

This is brilliant.

The way you write has some element that locks anyone who reads it in; the way this flows out carries such deep vibes and tension, and captivates interest so easily, possesses it to make it expand. The plot-as I said-is so well, so different-so original-you might even be better than LJ herself. This "cult" fits in so naturally, and you've managed to weave it in, making it sound so natural; in fact, now Rashel sounds complete even. With her and her mysterious past.

The characters are so well put in character, developed in such sense it seems so real. You put in enough, or rather, a perfect amount of detail that does create a movie in reader's minds, but allows them to interpret it at their own pace, all while getting through the same story, and its actions.

This is flawless. I was thinking if I were to give any criticism-I wouldn't be able to. You have such a intelligent manner, and the way you write really does make me awe.

You don't cease to amaze me.

Please update soon.

Update! :)

I can't believe this is your first fanfiction! It's brilliant, I love every bit of it. More importantly you stayed true to the characters and all your information on characters was right, which some people fail to do. Keep the updates coming:D

Have to say it... but I love the title of this fanfic! Lmao! It just reminds me of I am number four or I am a legend and it just makes me smile! :)

Ooook, nothing romantic between Ash and Rashel! What a realief! He wouldn't stand a chance with her anyway... she would beat him up everytime she saw him and that would only make him worse! :O

Update this amazing story soooooon! :D

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