Re-reading your stories and reading some for the first time. Enjoy your work.
FYI, not criticism: Please note the difference between loose and lose/losing. One of those things that grate on my teeth, such as your/you're and their/there. Hope you take this in the friendly way I mean it. Please keep writing, esp. Zibbs. Thanks

This was so sweet!

As a Zibbs fan really enjoyed story.

Ok I am not a zibbs fan( Tiva all the way!)

But i loved this story

And the part where ziva said she even hunted her father I started smiling so big and I looked like a dork but it was so funny. Then everyone in the room was looking at me weirdly so I had to stop. I luv this story :)

Good Story!

Amazing story...

A new story! Nice! :)

I like Kate and I'm so happy you wrote her into this one. It's definitely an interesting idea to see the two of them bonding. I really, really liked it!

Haunting Eli? That was just too funny to imagine! :D

Ohhhhhh ! Im thanking for two things ... one, YOU ARE BACK ! Two: You are back with this amazing story ! I really love love love it.

Ha ! when I read Ziva was in a coma I thought " and what if she meets Kate? " and you did my guess come true...yay !

Please, keep writing !

Very sweet... I like it! :D

Very beautiful story. You should be proud of this, I enjoyed every second of the three times I read it.

Well, this had one surprise after another! An enjoyable read, Molz...my favorite parts were when Gibbs followed Ziva to the restroom and the end, of course. _

Nice to have you back, as well, my friend.

Hugs!

ZC

*laughs aloud in her head* haunted her father? :D i would have loved to see this scene but i guess imagining it in my head is better, yes? xD

Awesome job hunny, even though u made it diff than i thought about it *lol* :D it's really good *nods and hugs ya* :)