So sad, angsty, and broken. Kind of makes me feel crummy, but it was a good story none the less. I don't know if the fact that, while I was reading this, I was listening to the song Whispers in the Dark by Skillet (I've developed a recent love for Skillet's music thanks to LoZ: Twilight Princess music videos on Youtube), but I nearly fept like crying a little bit at this. So sad...

i'm amused because this has the same title and a slightly similar idea to one of my stories. i like yours better though. especially the take on demyx and yuffie too. it's different interesting and believable