Good idea for a story but your grammar, spelling, word choice, sentence structure and writing in general is fairly poor. I would suggest getting someone else to beta the story before posting and that you read some novels or other officially published books to get a feel for writing on a more professional level.

Hey, is this fic dead? Like you hopefully are? BANG. Shoot yourself, you cocksuckiing filth.

I got lost with this part. "You may have noticed by now that your chakra is a bit more potent than other shinobi. This is do to the fact that Kushina was two months pregnant when I seal the Kyuubi in to you." Tf does that mean

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Thanks for the chapter

Finally! I've been stumbling more and more on references to the "Holy Log," and it finally clicked for me.

I suppose I can't blame you for following cannon here, though I hope Naruto doesn't blab his techniques in future chapters.

you need to work on your ancient tablet text thing. you start out nice, with some old English thrown in but then you seem to just lose it right after.

you even know anything about pregnancy? 2 month old fetus, if that, will not survive outside the womb, much less sealing a demon. I understand this is fanfiction, but come on...

Tsunade doesn't take shit from the council. Tsunade is like mom number 2 for Naruto.

I love you author, its about time someone promotes Naruto for what he's done.

FINA-FUCKING-LY! an author who gives Tsunade a damn backbone, *applauds*

Please pick up story it is so good so far

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

Yeah you made him weak so go fuck yourself you pathetic ass Kishimoto loving little bitch.