Reviews for Creep
ilomilo97 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I thought it was great. Selfsmut is always interesting- the though process is really intriguing.
While I personally have never masturbated, I do understand the rest of it. Especially that Cat carved Jade's name on her heart. I really like someone and I know they can't possibly return the feelings, but I can't let go. And I see her the internal struggle in Cat, and not wanting to let go of Jade, and using Jade to fuel her life, even if Jade doesn't want her.
Very nice work. :)
HeatherSS1 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Wow. I have to admit, out of all the Victorious characters Cat has always eluded me. So many questions about her, you know? But this was written SO well, it's kind of creepy, seeing inside how different and messed up the real Cat is.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Don't ever stop writing
darkcry chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
i think you should own victorious can you right another one about jade and tori not like this story i mean how the fall in love it will be called a unknown jori and it will be about danil and love ( god i am a sick bastard) you can kill me now ( or write form me i suck at righting) you are a god
Infinii chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
wow.
It's me chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
But I'm No Mercury chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I've read this story before, but know I'm reviewing.

Your really good (though you've heard it before) I love the way you write Cade :)

I've written Cade stories before, but none have matched how beautifully you write. Don't ever stop please :D
greyrooms chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
This is the most beautiful thing I've ever read. Like, I lierally stopped breathing for a few seconds. Wonderfully written, my heart has never broken so much for one character. 3
AliasParadox chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Wow! This actually made me cry for a second, because my situation is exactly like this. Very well done!
sashimidragon chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Wow. Just wow. That was incredible. So much raw emotion. So true to life.

This was my favorite line.

"You have to finish before she disappears, before reality kicks in, and your breath calms, and your heart sinks down like a stone tossed into a lake."

Perfect imagery. Beautiful.
WeFallForever chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Whoa, this is spectacular! The raw emotion Cat felt, how she related Jade to something creeping in her mind-I loved it! Excellent job!
writeitonme chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
HOW DO YOU DO IT?

My heart is breaking so much but I like feeling this way...

How can you make me like feeling my heart break?

Words can't describe how... brilliant-no that word isn't even enough...
K9GM3 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
o_0;

Jamie. What.

This was... wow. This was amazing. I genuinely can't think of anything wrong with this story. Just, everything... The metaphors, and the premise, and the narrative and just everything.

This has got to be your best oneshot yet, no lie.
volksgti94 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Woa

That was just...

Woaa.

I love this solo Cat, not as much as a Cade, but hey, I love Cat either way :D but yea great little one shot.

And yes I do love a writing maniac. Especially when it's from an awesome writer like yourself :)
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