I just so happen to have been listening to N's farewell as i read this, it nearly made me cry 3

When N said farewell, I couldn't push the A button anymore. I wasn't ready to say goodbye to him just yet.

Beautifully written.

I like how you used the playable character's point of view.

I shall stalk you in a little while, after finishing the White and N section of FFnet.

:)

This is so beautifully written! I love it so much!

Too bad that they didn't end up as a pairing, but the electricity metaphor linked with Zekrom that White has are really great!

Hope you will write more of this ferriswheel pairing~ X3

please WRITE MORE

I don't think I can say much aside from I thought this was beautifully written and I loved it. So many gorgeous lines and descriptions.

AWWWWW

Aww sad

This is sooo adorable. I love it. The electricity metaphor is just so beautiful.

Well. I really like this story, and the electric-and-shadow theme running through it. Of course, I'm also a Ferriswheelshipper myself, so I'm not exactly an unbiased source of information. :P But still, if the writing was crap, I wouldn't like it. Does the grunt actually say that in the cave? (PS, the English place and pokemon names have been released.)

You're good :D

Yay for Ferriswheelshipping!

To bad N is gone but don't worry I heard rumors that N will return in generation VI but this time he'll help the player to stop Team Plasma and his father Ghetsis, in the new pokemon games Sun version and pokemon Moon version. Which also means that Team Plasma will return in generation VI with their new leader Ghetsis and five Admins two female Admins and three male Admins.

Wow, that was great. I've taken a liking to N. :)

Finessefully,

X

This story just about made me cry.

Very well written!