good god that was hot

My word, this is absolutely the best yaoi of this pairing I've ever read. You are TALENTED. I will love this fanfic forever. Oh my goodness, and your descriptive vernacular.. I'm in love. :3 -FeatheryFlow

This was absolutely perfect! No words can express all of the things i am currently feeling
Seriously ,this is one of the best Ciel x Sebastian story i have had the pleasure of reading...
Keep up the fantastic writing ! :)

holy JESUS THIS WAS HOT! And it was also cute, and it was also something that pulled at my emotions, because of how worried Sebs was and awwwwwww. DX I felt so sorry for Cie when Sebs was being so mean to him and teasing him by saying he'd leave! XD and JESUS JONES! That part where Ciel says he loves Sebastian? Beautiful. And that simile you used?! Genius. Gaahhhhhh. Awesome one-shot. Awesome.

aww...

This is awesome! It's got some really funny parts! :D Great job!

i love that it is like SO cute right at the end, then I look back up at title and laugh my ass story SMEXI YAOI KURO CRACK!

This story was so awesome and hot. I loved it. Thanks!

Loved it... It was hoooooot!

I was too lazy to login, but I'm Crazy4Moony and I can easily be found here, through the search button

I noticed some spelling mistakes, here they are :

In the first part, paragraph 3, it should be: ‘all too fast’

Part 2, paragraph 4, should be ‘was coming too quickly’

There’s also a mistake considering the tenses, you flip to the present somewhere around when Sebastian is stretching Ciel it was: 'He’s been anticipating' I think

Near the ending, Sebastian says: “why, the young master…” in his speech, it should be: “this lowly pawn’s heart”

I really enjoyed this story, it was so deliciously smutty. It's also amazing how this is a SebasxCiel where they're not OOC, because most of the times hooking them up requires some OOCness 't was awesome !

Love,

Crazy4Moony

This was fantastic. :D

Oh... My...! I loved it! XD

noice!

CIEL PHANTOMHIVE!~

loved it.