This has potential. I loved the premise and I actually quite enjoyed the pairing. I would absolutely love to see this fully fleshed out.

Dammit I thought for sure this was going to have a happy ending. For all of Schneizel's hardwork Lulu still ends up skewered
Love the story btw

what a great story. lelouchXtianzi pairing is more great then lulu x cc or Killen. please update it soon. this story is too good to be abandon. thanks for letting us read such a masterpiece. waiting for next chapter.

Please update this romatic story !
Or write a sequel to it with Lelouch meeting her again in R2 .
Put a Lemon as well please ! Lelouch x Tianzi is my favorite pairing and it would be awesome to read another one like this ,but with a lemon :D

Looks nice. Although from what I understand, Jiang is the family name.

Really wish you would make a chapter 2...

Love it.

I would like to see a second chapter when Zero saves the Empress and maybe he can reveal himself as Lelouch and appologize for taking so long to see her again.

I liked it, it was sweet and sad and very well written. I want to go out in the site and look for more of this's irking now...

Fundindar

The story is great. I would appreciate if you would continue writing.

I think your idea is great and could be developed further into a great story.

I hope this gets updated.

This story was simply amazing! At first I was wary of the pairing due to age differences, but thankfully you adjusted the timeline to quell any sense of worry I had. I really enjoyed the characterization of everyone, especially since Schneizel was shown as a caring individual instead of the usual cold, calculating persona he is given. While bittersweet, the ending does present the possibility that they will one day be able to reunite. At least, that's what I'd like to think.

I hope I'm not being too forward in saying that I'd love to see more of this; an extra chapter if you will. However, I understand that this story is a few years old by now, so the idea might not be interesting to you any longer. However, I want to thank you for such a touching story!

Instant Favorite Story and Author *dies while sipping tea*

it was a romance turned tragedy. Too bad it seems like a one-shot because it seems like it could be a different setting for the story.

ohh manly tears, beautifull absolutely beatiful. but i must ask will there be a sequel? thank you very much for this immensly enjoyable read.

Is there a sequal? This should not end like this! The sweet love should not end!