The last few weeks I've been reading Jily fics non-stop, the good and the bad and the truly great, and this is the first time I actually favorited and bookmarked a story! It was truly fantastic, so full of feelings, emotions and sensuality! Actually all your Jily fics were amazing and full of chemistry. The only problem is that I wish there were more than 3 of them because you truly wrote them amazingly well, I'm so impressed and am just left wishing for more.

I have saved this for years. I crave more of this story. More of this writing. Truly poetic.

This was poetic... seriously beautiful. Not cheap, or cheesy, but really great.
Awesome writing style. Love it a lot!

I loved this so much. Your writings are the first I've read of lily and James and I definitely love each one of them. Keep writing more!

Fantastic writing style. Love that James isn't portrayed as a such a pining pathetic smuck as he is in many other Fics.
Lily is great too - usually I don't like stories that have in denial about James so much, but yours is wonderfully done and not too drawn out (which I hate the most). You also haven't made her into a marauders Hermoine either, thank you so much for that! Keep writing!

I really enjoyed your story. I'll check your other fics

So beautiful. One of the best ways, to me, of L/J getting together is probably through alot of drama. Ive read so much friends-become-more-than-friends storys, that I feel like im about to puke. But youre my medicine today :)

Love, ~BML ;)

I'm reviewing this chapter 'cause I've already done the last one, the last time I read this. Soo...

This is pretty much the best. I really love the way you've characterized everybody. James and Lily are just so stubborn, and the Marauders are so sick of it! It's brilliant. Please write some more soon!

I think... I love you.

I really liked this! It was fun to read :)

Excellent story and finally one where Lily Evans is not a nerd who nobody wants.

Absolutely wonderful. I loved it to pieces. You have got a wonderful talent for bringing characters to life and making my heart just to my throat. I'd love to see what else you do for LJ next. Cheers on the brilliant work!

Again, just brilliant. I think the lack of dialogue in much of the story is part of what makes it special, but mostly it's just your talent with words. Well done.

I'm not sure I can pinpoint exactly what makes this story quite so... different/intriguing/intense/well-written. See, I can't even pinpoint what it is, although all of those adjectively fit. I guess I just haven't your talent for using words in exactly the right way to portray the emotions and feelings behind them so aptly. Well done.

Love it. Love the writing style. Love the self-pitying tone. Love the slight twist on the regular old overdone plot. Can't wait to read more. Well done.