You are a brilliant writer. Wish u would bring Caskett back with ur words

You're fifteen? Or, you were when you wrote this? WOW, I'm impressed! I started writing fanfic at 12-13, some of my early stuff is on here just because I'm sentimental, but it's kind of terrible, haha! This was amazing, way to go. And yes, I know it was years ago... I'm a newbie to the fandom and I'm reading post-eps for all the best :)

Oh, and also, I thought you said "He wouldn't fit into her boxers". And then I laughed, because, well, innuendo, haha. Anyways, thank you for sharing! You had more courage at 15 than I do now at 25... I barely publish anything! And this was awesome!

I rather enjoyed it actually. Anyone who didn't know it was the beginning of the end was stupid.

Very nice Story! Ireally enjoyed your style.

Pretty good and super nice to read...

And the boxes ? That's exactly how I picture the way Kate thinks.

Thanks !

You captured Kate SO WELL in this. It is perfectly in character and fantastic. Well done :)

Well written :D

xo

Seriously amazing, it is absolutely fantastic! I do not, just wow. I love, it is pure brilliance. I think you captured her train of thoughts perfectly.

Very good, I liked it a lot !

Very good writing for only 15 years old !

Best recount of knockdown kiss ever.

You paint a beautiful picture of a complex person.

Very good! I really enjoyed this. I really liked the part about being able to fit Caste in one of her boxes! Well done!

this is beyond amazing! your stories are so insightful and so brilliantly crafted! and i loved these lines:

"He didn't fit into her boxes. She couldn't shape him into something that would. That meant trouble."

anyways, fantastic writing, i loved this!

I love it! And I'm not just pretending ;-)

Really. You should stay up that late more often ;-)

Ah, that was damn good. I'm not generally one to read Knockdown stories because of the sheer number of them (and I think a lot of people probably share that attitude) but I have to say I'm glad I read this one. It was true Beckettness, so kudos for that.

Oh, and it may have been over four years since I was fifteen, but to me, 2am was- and actually still is- the best time of day lol. I've always found it very conducive to good writing ;)

It's awesome! And you're only 15! I meen I'm 15 too and I couldn't write something nearly as good as this was! Nice work! :)