Reviews for A Night at the Hospital |
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marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 touching and heartwarming |
angel12121993 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012 NO BAD COMMENTS! this was SO beautiful! :))) 3 :D |
RivalsAreAllies chapter 1 . 9/15/2011 "This is an excellent and very heartfelt story." |
mimibeebee chapter 1 . 9/10/2011 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW x934957636959346969! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! oh my God, this is so fluffly, i just wanna snuggle i and keep it and AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! ! ! wow, this was beautifuly written, perfectly paced, its was just SO. FRIGGEN. PERFECT. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I- AWWWWWWWWWWWW |
skittyscatter chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 Really good; I can't find many stories like this in the Jimmy Neutron section! It was really philosophical with a little Jimmy/Cindy interaction; it reminded me of a scene in Avatar the Last Airbender when the parents named their child Hope when the baby was born in the middle of a dangerous trip. I only caught one mistake: Baby is spelled with a y instead of an e. Other than that, though, the grammar and spelling are both really good. |
operacynic chapter 1 . 5/1/2011 Very sweet and well-written :) |
FlittingGemini chapter 1 . 4/8/2011 That was so beautiful! Bravo. The only suggestion I have is don't put slight J/C in the summary, this is hard core love buddy! LOL |
thesmuttypirate chapter 1 . 2/23/2011 When I read the title, I was all "oh noes! D:)" but I read on... I can definatly see Cindy damn-near mutilating Jimmy when she's giving birth, gave me "the lulz" (is that the saying when breaking into a mini giggle fit?). I applaud the name "Hope" as well. Definatly (as if I haven't told you this before in other reveiws... trying to stay consistant ha ha) poetic. I absolutely love your writing style. Its... just awesome. :) you should write more, so I can R&R :3 |
empnk chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 I loved it! I couldn't believe I didn't know the word! Oh well. Keep the good work! Good Job! |
JazzGirl123 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011 Awwww. This was so short but still gave as much as a real story book. In other words, FANTABULOUS! |
Jimokc chapter 1 . 2/11/2011 Very impressive I was shocked to find clear coherent sentences and a good foundation that was yet eluding to the end. Amazing well written story keep writing and try to aim for longer more complicated story I must say you are perhaps one of the few people who could do the Jimmy neutron seris justice. |
Katia11 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 AWW! Cute! Well written and totally believable! LOVED it! :) |
CN7 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 I very much liked this. It was very captivating and quite sweet. I loved how you kept them in character even through slight flashes of memories and during Cindy's labor. Great work! ) |
AirWorthyFunky chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 That was such a cute story :] ... I really liked the end ! I was all like ' awwwww that so cute!' It really felt like it was Jimmy the one telling the story.. You did a great job |
MysticLady3 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011 Aww that was such a cute one shot. Great job and write more soon. Like DiceRox09 said, there aren't many stories about J/C having a kid. I've also notice that not many stories about them getting married actually write about the wedding. Its always the aftermath. Again great job :) |