| Reviews for Blue Silk |
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   True Essence chapter 1 . 7/7/2014 It was a nice story, I really got into it in the second chapter. Definitely comb through for spelling/grammar mistakes, double check them even after your Beta reads through it. I know you said that English is not your first language and I have to say good job for writing a story in a complicated language that isn't your own. It was really hard to get into it in the beginning due to all of the grammar mistakes. Having a degree in English makes it hard for me not to notice and it can really drive me insane but I was able to get past that and read the story due to the fact that I was enjoying what you set up here. Though, I am curious, would Corneo recognize Cloud later when he has to infiltrate with Tifa and Aerith later? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/10/2013 i love it. you can tell zack loves cloud too |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 5 . 7/21/2013 haha lol cloud just cant stay out of dresses, awesome story loved it |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/20/2013 LOL OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! 3 3 3 |
| Thunder Of Friendship chapter 5 . 7/20/2013 Awww...is it over? It's been great reading this story! I loved every single part of it! I really truly enjoyed every single moment of it. Thank you very much for writing it. This chapter was really nice too! The whole story was wonderful! Poor Cloud having to wear a dress and be received like that by his hero, hehe, poor thing. And even with his vow, he still loses his memories and wears a dress again, hahaha. oh poor cloud...ummm, but wait...considering this story...wouldn't Don Corneo have recognized Cloud on the second dress-as-a-woman-mission? hehehe, well that doesn't matter, the story is just awesome! |
| PCheshire chapter 5 . 7/19/2013 does it have to end? are you going to make a sequel? it would certainly be welcomed... it's quite good! especially THAT scene xD |
| Black maid56 chapter 4 . 4/7/2013 oh my god Zack must be happy to see them girls. Then there is cloud in a dress which makes everything better. |
| ElenaLionward07 chapter 4 . 4/6/2013 Oh gods, I don't wanna know what happens next, but I do! |
| wolfawaken chapter 4 . 4/6/2013 Oh my! English is not your first language ! Well just from reading your story I could not had know. English is my first language and I still making mistakes. Good story do write more. |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 4 . 4/6/2013 yes yes yes this is awesome i am dying for more please updates soon . |
| Namine23 chapter 4 . 4/6/2013 Geez this is getting good! I can't wait for the next chapter though it was slightly difficult to read since it want Beta Read, butI still managed. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/19/2013 I NEED for this to continue! Please, I beg of you! |
| Saber Amane chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 cool story so far! update again soon! |
| scythe657 chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 Ooooohhhhhh...Cloudy! *giggles* |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/1/2013 MORE! |
