Make an ash POV !

Toothless is like a 6 year old...

I think you need to reread this chapter, because there are alot of words that still refer Ayden as Male.

And that was "A girl and her dragon", and what do think of it?
Well based off the original movie "How to train your dragon", This story set things to a whole different level on a scale to 100.01% . It had different characters while others stay the same and has a few plot twists. We can see visualized what is going as we read, the action,drama, comedy and everything else from the movie with a totally different flip. I wouldn't call this just a rip off in bad way at all, this is an awesome rip off . A story for those to remember. I'm dai the white lion, and remember. Any movie with a genderswap will lead to suprising results and explain to your future boyfriend that you male friend is a sweet and caring creature, bye

Really good

O M F G! I ABSOLUTLY LOOOOOVE YOUR STORY! Lol, sorry bout that, but I really DO love your story! I’m kinda wondering why you didn’t keep to cannon and have Ayden lose her leg though, so if you could answer that question that would be great. I was ALSO wondering if you were thinking of doing a HTTYD 2 continuation of this story and I really hope so! If you don’t then I will be a very upset dango (༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ). Besides that, I really like how you kept to the essence of each character, trust me I write books and I know how hard it can be if you’re writing a story and you try to keep them as close to cannon as possiable,

I love this story but I really think Ayden is over reacting. I can understand the mortification of it, but it was stupid of her to bath out in the open. Anyone could have come upon her.

Ash doesn't have anything to apologize about except for not immediately looking away or turning his back to her when he recovered from the shock. He didn't know she was there, making it an honest to god accident that was caused by Ayden.

Ayden is at fault for not being smart enough to know not to bath where anyone could have come upon with look outs. She doesn't need to be naked to give Toothless a bath.

Anyone could have seen her. She's not the victim, just made a stupid decision which led to a accident. In case you're wondering, I am a girl.

I do admit Ash should not have sneaked into the home and gave her maybe a day or two to get her thoughts together, though.

In case you're wondering, I am a girl. If it were me. Yes I would be mortified, and yell at whoever saw me to look away. However, I wouldn't be angry with whoever, because it would be my stupidity of bathing in a place anyone can go to.

She should've slapped him. That's what I would've done.

O-oh snap! If I were Ayden I would never show my face on Berk ever again. I feel sorry for her. Correction, I feel REALLY sorry for her.

If I were ash and I saw her floating I would have said "What the-". And to make matters worse Ayden almost got caught.

Aaaawwww! In all of my years of being a girl and reading fanfiction, that has to be the most beautiful thing I have read. I am at TEARS because of how beautiful this is. And yes I am a girl.

Oh no he didn't! BTW I LOVE this story. But then again I like any kind of fanfiction that involves How to Train Your Dragon. Ninja Out!️

(So ' means thinking) 'So why didn't you?' Thought Ayden. Oh and quick question, why did you name female Hiccup Ayden? Just wondering.

Hiccup lied! During the entire course of the movie there was no snow nor hail! So I'm going to have to call bull on that.

This was a great read
Keep on the writes