Holy "Sugar honey ice tea". Thats one big shocker. Crazy dude is still alive? Thats so cool.

haters gonna hate. this was waaaaay back before i grew as a writer. Then i ditched this account and created a newer, better account.

Sorry for bein' a troll, but this sucked. It had no plot, a confusing ending, and no details, only a few lame sentences that described nothing. And Flapjack and Sally never dated. The last things they said to each other were, "I don't love you!"

I want you to grow as a writer, so PLEASE, add description, and make sure the story isn't two chapters long with confusing facts and such, because my brain hurts from trying to figure out why this is happening so fast.

If you had written it out longer, it would have been a wonderful story.

Again, sorry for the flame, but it's for the best.

Your review cut me deep. It's my first time writing a story. I appreciate your honesty though. Leave ideas in the comment area, plz

Alright...

I read this, blink my eyes in confusion and wonder: What the Heck?

Look, it's not like I don't like this, it's just... not a very good story. It's badly written, doesn't have a plot and doesn't give any information to the readers:

How did Flappy loose his hand? When did he find Candied Island? What has Sally been doing all these years? Where the heck did the name Jacky come from? And most importantly for a FlappSally fic: Where's the love story?

I recomend trying to be a bit more creative with your writing style instead of just throw the words at the readers and expect them to understand something. Describe things a little more so the readers wouldn't be completely lost.

Ok?

Just friendly advise, I don't mean no harm by it.

Please like. It took me two months to write this. Any ideas? leave them in the comment area