Reviews for Coincidental Major |
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MastersWriter chapter 35 . 1/29 I love this story! Reading it along with Bella's POV was just wonderful. I love this future take! |
cullengirl08 chapter 35 . 9/1/2019 I just finished reading Edward's POV of the story and loved it just as much as Bella's! |
Lcoutu chapter 22 . 7/9/2019 Girl! I know I’m late to this party but I love love love love LOVE this story! Already read Major Misconduct and is why I’m reading this! |
crunchinn x ice chapter 35 . 6/11/2019 loved your story! |
Kesme chapter 16 . 4/5/2019 Kinda lost my appetite, so I’ll eat two more plates. Love how much they eat |
LAB1 chapter 33 . 9/14/2018 I had forgotten how much I loved Edward's POV! This is one of my favorite stories and I'm so happy to be rereading it again! Happy sigh! |
lippy2004 chapter 35 . 9/9/2018 that's just an amazing story I've loved it |
archy12 chapter 4 . 7/19/2018 Wow, things are certainly heating up between them! |
archy12 chapter 1 . 7/18/2018 I just read Major Misconduct...again, and that lead me to this. Not sure whether I read all of this last time, or reviewed it. Let me try! :) |
kneon chapter 35 . 6/18/2018 I loved this chapter the most. Loved that Edward's plan seemed to work out for them. It seemed that they both went to Dartmouth for undergrad. He bust his butt to graduate and get to his NHL career. Glad you picked the Red Wings my home team. Seems Bella continued her education as Edward played. Silly boy didn't realize that she was waiting all this time for him to ask her to marry him. They could have been married for awhile, but maybe in the end it was meant to be this way. Loved how you ended it with them just knowing that they made a baby. Wish you would have continued. |
kneon chapter 32 . 6/18/2018 Very bittersweet and emotional chapter. |
kneon chapter 31 . 6/18/2018 This was interesting to read Edward's side of the fight. |
kneon chapter 30 . 6/18/2018 Reading this chapter was actually very bittersweet after reading Major Misconduct because you know what is going to happen. |
cctwilight chapter 7 . 4/22/2018 Edward is so clueless! Bella is too! |
cctwilight chapter 6 . 4/22/2018 On my, Alice and Jasper are so excited that Edward finally admitted he likes Bella. I hope he doesn't chicken out about asking Bella to go to the dance. |