!Great job!
~ONCEUPONAWRITER~

Ps. Maybe get rid of the H word? It's a clean story, but that word messes it up.

Superb.

A wonderful, believable meeting between Helen and Mirage. You wrote both of them very well.

This was very well-done. I recently re-watched the movie and was wondering the same thing. What happened to her? This gives a good explanation of that. Excellent work!

Aha! Here we are! I read this story a few months back, forgot to review, and could not find it again for the longest time.

Anyways, an excellent story! I really enjoyed this, I always wondered how Helen felt about Mirage after she saw the two hugging in that scene. You wrote this beautifully, and the grammar was a big plus too.

~RR

And that's another loose end tied up! Good job!

I really (REALLY) like how you intimate that Mirage's name is more than just some code. Does she fade out invisibly, like Violet? Or does she have some kind of short-range teleportation ability? Or is it along the lines of "the ability to cloud men's minds" like The Shadow used to do? I'm glad you didn't just spell it out.

I also VERY much appreciate your attention to grammar and spelling. Breath o' fresh air, it is.

This one goes in Favorites.

That was really nice. I always enjoy Helen/Mirage clean-ups and I love a Helen insight D Good job!

Very flawless job on this from beginning to end-everyone was in character, it started out serious, and then all the conflict resolved itself with some humor at the end. Lovely job!

-Weasley-