such a great but short Story! very interesting idea of what did hapen...love this Ari...i think the double agentt stuff his father but him trough and that he did not accept him and his Little sister as his children did make him to what he was...and it was really strange that he did not shot Tim later...he was a great sniper andTim was full in view... i mean this could explain anything! awww so cute an still sad, and this gentle ari is great

Very nice. I love stories where the characters all meet well before the canon says that they do, and you do it amazingly. Keep up the amazing work!

awesome

Nice.

AW! That is so adorable! Somehow, it makes perfect sense with everything canon without having any OC's! I love it!

This is really good! Nice thing with the ear and tying it into the fact that Tim suffers from sea sickness

I would have loved to see what would have happened in the future. Like you did in The Best Prize. Would Ari and Ziva remembered him? Would Tim remember them? Would anything happen between Tim and Ziva?

Other than that, I loved it.

Hi, this makes me want to do all sorts of crying. Happy to sad. I am tearing up. Because of the mini marathon of NCIS today for their villians that just wouldn't die (I'm sure thats not the real name of it but oh well) I was in a mood to see if Ari interacted with Timmy. And your stories were all I could find. So I must thank you for being the only person to have thought of the amazingness that is Ari and Timmy interacting. I will probably spend all of my free time in school trying to write a fic for them. And I have you to thank. So thank you. Your stories really are very good.

I love it! I'd quite enjoy seeing Tim remember meeting Ari, Ziva, and Ducky! Also wondering why Timmy's ear hurt before Ari hit him my accident. well done.

really good story. But...I lived on a island til i was 13 so i know kids under 12 are requred to wear life jackets and there are no seat belts on boats. but over all good story!

dude u should totally make this a story! it would b sooo freakin awsome! this is actually the first ncis story that ive read like this...(though considering ive mostly been reading slash tony/tim or gibbs/tim or gibbs/tony and harry potter crossovers it really isnt too surprizing.

I love seeing an appearance of Gibs, :-)

Nice to see Ari protecting Tim from future harm.

~~Sue

Love this story. Timmy with his blue bear Gibs awsome. Tim always being the gentleman and not protecting the girl. the ending i had to cry myself when his mother died and he was crying into the bear.

I get really excited for your Tim/Ari stories! They very imaginative and are always interesting!

"He frowns however when he looks at Timmy's ear. There is damage around the ear itself that in no way could have come from his simple slap. He starts to ask Timmy what happened when a soft sniffling interrupts him."-Does that mean his mom hit him or something?

"She's not going to bite me or anything is she?"- _ haha how cute.

DUCKY!

"His name is Ari."- aww. Little!Ziva.

Loved it! very interesting! i wonder if tim or ziva will remember this later on when they meet again...

...Ari swallows and reigns in his emotions...

Reins: any means of curbing, controlling, or directing; check; restraint.

Reigns: the time during which one (as a sovereign) reigns

You lost me with this.