This was awesome! :D

Aww…nothing like a turtle and his horse. ;)
You had me at the edge of my seat when I saw that things weren’t getting resolved towards the end. I was in that thriller, ‘oh please don’t let this end poorly!’ mode. Good Job! I really enjoyed the hallucination portion of this story for Leo and his brothers breaking into Dorian’s mansion. (“This isn’t angry?!”…or at least that’s how I read it!) I like how you developed your bad guy character. He’s not as ‘bad’ as he is human…he just wants some sort of cash revenue and poor Leo got stuck in his greedy plans. I’m glad that even though Basir covered his trail when he initially captured Leo, he could not hold back the communication between father and son. But my absolute favorite new character that you presented was Kachluma. Talk about a good Samaritan! He didn’t expect much in return as long as he got Leo to safety. Such a sweet bond of loyalty! It was portrayed so beautifully in this story.

Good adventure tale. Nicely done.

Ooh. Okay, You've caught my attention...settling in to read more :)

:D yes, me like

so scared of making mistakes

I have read this so far,and it has a very unique slant on this. Poor Leo! I really hope you will be continuing it in the future.

Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.

Nice story. It was a fun read. .

Oh... why did this end? :( Even if it was a great ending...

The fight was so suspenseful! You have a knack for writing action scenes; it's definitely your strength!

Great job on this fic!

Oh! My poor baby, Leo seems to be a magnet for ugly wounds. Thanks heavens he arrived to the docks. My heart almost skip a beat when that man grabbed Leo's hood.

Arggg... if there is something I REALLY HATE in this world is when people call my beloved: CREATURE, FREAK or PET, I wish I could tear their lungs out!.

This is the time when I am grateful for finding a gifted writer like you, I loooved the fight scene for Leo. You really gave expression to his personality.

Kachiuma is great friend! I would like to thank him for protecting Leo. The sound of his brothers voices must be a blessing for Leonardo!. IT WAS FOR ME!.

Basir... if I could fight he will be gargling with his teeth.

Donatello did a great job patching Kachiuma's wound. What do you mean "a horse" Raphael... Kachiuma is the BEST horse on this planet, YES SIR!.

At last Leonardo is with his family again.

Another of your master pieces is complete!

CONGRATULATIONS! I had great times reading it.

Don't worry I already Know Dondena's fics. She is another gifted writer, JUST LIKE YOU! (Hehe I am a bit toady :D, but I feel that way).

Rose will be waiting eagerly for your next story LNW. o .

Thank you.

Raph's concern is the same as mine. Well, at least with the "magic" of your story I know exactly what is happening with Leo. I don't know which one was funnier Raph pacing, wearing a hole in the floor, or Donnie explaining his seasickness in Einstein's way. I can't believe Michelangelo translated that to his hothead brother.

Leonardo can handle paranoia, but it is too much to bear for a hothead, but you are right LNW Leo would be proud.

How the foot find out they were on the ship? Argg... maybe that scaumbag Dorin call the Shredder.

Time to kick butt!, writing fight scenes is one of your best qualities o . Once again: you made my day. Thank you. :D.

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real soon thanks.

You write a beautiful action scene. The fluidity and visionary details that you give to the reader are extremely helpful, especially since most writers cannot achieve the same level of handiwork.

Another great chapter, as always well-written and with good characterization. Donny getting seasick was a nice touch, by the way, lol.

Looking forward to more. :-)