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Nice.

Somehow I've become very enamoured of the idea of Ari as Tim's guardian. I think that if anyone could get to Ari, it would be McGee, and especially if Ari was thinking of what Tim could do for Ziva.

Its really sad, but in a good way...well err you know ummmm anyway good job!

I love how Tim not only gets past Gibbs' barriers but also Ari's. I'd really love to see more. :)

I really enjoyed reading this, loved the sensitivity of Ari and how he saw Tim.

Beautifully written and quite intriguing. I would love to see a sequel.

This is fascinating. Is the first chapter based on a certain episode? I am really curious to see if there is more. Sheila

"The medical examiner hides his smile when he sees the assorted juices that Gibbs is unloading. "Heavens Jethro, you bought out their entire line." "No, Duck just…some kids can't drink certain juices." - AW! at Giibs referring to Tim as a kid.

"A handwritten sheet slips out and he pales as he reads the letter written to him by his enemy. He picks up his cell phone and dials Ziva's number. "Umm…Ziva, can you come over here? I have something you need to see. I know that it's late but…I think you should see this...It's from Ari." - Now IMO Ziva will either be happy or quite angry once she reads that nore.

...For now. woo! this is very interesting! can't wait to see if there will be more on this one and what ziva and tim's reactions will be!

This was great. But by "for now" do you mean you'll update here or you'll write a new story continuing from this? please respond!

Hmmm.

Thought provoking.