Reviews for At dawn
MareStryder chapter 13 . 5/15
I never thought I’d get hooked to this story since the setting is in modern Konoha. Minor characters and details might be a little confusing but I still love this story.

I love the subtlety of Ino and Sakura’s relationship. Sexual relationship can be interesting to read but sometimes subtlely is best to depict true relationship.
Roxy4vamp chapter 13 . 1/14/2019
Simply wonderful
lemon-rind chapter 13 . 4/9/2018
I loved the story. It was pretty great :) I was curious from the get-go about who Sakura was and how she and Ino would connect. I wasn't disappointed. The AU you have here is fantastic. I only wish the story was longer so that I could see more of this beautiful world you've made.

Thanks for writing this! And thank you double for giving it a happy ending!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/23/2018
Hey, loved this so much. Read this probably a year ago in the bathroom (not on the toilet) avoiding homework. Now, after months of searching, finally found this story again and reread it over the past few days. I've changed so much over the time between the first and second times reading this... It was like bringing back old, surfaced memories. Anyway, thank you, this was one of the best fan fictions I've read:)
Guest chapter 13 . 1/6/2018
Just read your story, it was really good! Thanks for sharing!
Jj chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Dear god this is fantastic!
Draco Oblivion chapter 9 . 9/6/2017
I really like the look into Lee's perspective. Sakura and Ino's relationship is as enjoyable to see as always but, wow, to their home lives. Sairi is apparently dead? Reika is horrible (don't like to judge but abuse of children, especially their own, is where I draw the line) but Mari and her mother's lives will hopefully be improving.
Draco Oblivion chapter 8 . 9/6/2017
Hahahah, oh god. This is goin great. Really loving all the characters and while there are a few mistakes here and there you write English really well! Nice to see Sasuke not completely roll over for Danzo and I'm also happy to see Sakura getting trustworthy people in her life and her growing relationship with Ino.
Kay Ross chapter 13 . 1/17/2017
This was one hell of an adventure! I loved it the entire way through and am a little sore that it's over. Huhu, it was so sweet. I'll admit that I felt like the 'Sakura' here was a little out-of-character from Canon, but I grew to appreciate how you painted her in this little world. Their dynamic and understanding fit so well, and I absolutely /loved/ how there was this massive political plot that was happening at the same place as the romance.

This is definitely one of my InoSaku favorites. Thank you, and I hope you could make some one shots or snippets into their lives!
cloudyTomboy chapter 13 . 1/3/2017
This was my second or third time reading this. It's still so sweet 3 this is such a rare ship and it's nice to see someone handling it with...care? respect? love? all of those things. Thank you
Aquamarine99 chapter 13 . 11/21/2016
Definitely one of the best fan fictions I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The way every aspect of the story flowed with clear purpose, how Sakura and Ino's relationship blossomed subtly, quietly like a budding flower... Absolutely spectacular. Thank you for writing this beautiful story 3
Skylar Datenshi chapter 13 . 2/12/2016
Well, I have to say, I was right about my theory about who the Telepath was.

And the relationship between Ino and Sakura? It's different, the pacing and their bond with each other. I'm not sure if it it feels genuine to me - I think so since I love this fic now.

I've never been good at reviewing, I think such randomly things during the readings and forget to comment on them before moving onto the next chapter. But there was various parts of the story that I really enjoyed so I would definitely reread this. Probably in two years so that everything isn't so fresh in my mind.

Thanks for the awesome story!
Skylar Datenshi chapter 7 . 2/11/2016
... Why do I get the impression that the enemy telepath is a relative of Ino's? Like, Irake's son was actually taken instead of dying in an accident.
BrookylnBurrito chapter 10 . 10/5/2015
"do you understand now? do you understand who I am?"
that gave me chills!
M chapter 13 . 8/24/2015
this was amazing! Definitely one of my favourite fics. Thank you for sharing this :)
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