Reviews for The Next Flight |
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auri-australis chapter 3 . 4/18/2014 Nice story. Connor is great. It must be so difficult for him |
LunaOlcaRaca chapter 3 . 11/21/2012 Please, please update fast! I really want to know what'll happen next :) |
star chapter 3 . 11/30/2011 Father-son talk, father-son talk, why is it taking so long? We can't wait you~ You can suppose, I like the story this far. Just keep going. :P |
Corzan chapter 3 . 10/13/2011 Where is the rest? :( Really good story, by the way. |
erk chapter 3 . 9/11/2011 Very good fic, indeed. I like very much your writing style and the plot. Keep going! |
nomercy745 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011 Please update soon! This is a master peice! |
inu chapter 3 . 8/22/2011 Cliffhanger! ARGH! You have to update, this is too good fic to be forgotten. Plot is very, very interesting and I'm curious what will happen next. I like a lot your writing, keep going! |
Archeron28 chapter 3 . 7/8/2011 This is really good, KEEP WRITEING! |
Drafeg chapter 3 . 4/6/2011 I absolutely love this fic. 3 Can't wait what will happen next. Update soon, please. :D |
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 3 . 2/9/2011 nice, i think lynus' interpretation of conor's feelings was explained really well :) |
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 2 . 1/26/2011 hi! it's really good seeing as english isn't your first language! just a niggle: some sentences would work better with some commas in e.g. 'she really needed him close why couldn't he see that' should be 'she really needed him close, why couldn't he see that' because it allows you to see where to pause apart fromn that, i like it! :) |
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 1 . 1/24/2011 this story sounds really interesting! well done! : ) |