Bit choppy in spots, but a very good re-work. Quite enjoyable.

Wouldn't it be great if there was some sort of class/seminar about diversity of mutations and the do's and don'ts of how to interact with each other? I totally think we need this in our actual education system and I think it would be doubly necessary in a situation where powers are involved.

so is Ianto in charge or is jack

Yay! Rose is back. And cute janto fluff should be coming I he. EEEKKKK update soon!

EEEEK update soon. I love Imaging Ianto in jacks place it so strange but exciting:)

Okay so for the most part Ianto's story is Jack's story, but you still have Ianto from the 21st century and Jack from the 51st century. How did Jack get hooked up with the Doctor?

So is Jack still immortal?

Not good. Please, write more.

Thanks for this great story. I look forward to more. :)

Nice

I just want to say that your story is awesome! Keep writing because this is best immortal ianto story I have read.

Oh dear Jack suspending Ianto indefinitely isn't going to do his and Ianto's fraigle relationship any good. It would have been wiser if Jack had taken Ianto aside and discussed his concerns in private not infront of the others and ordering Ianto to talk to Martha will more than likely do more harm than good. I do hope that Jack realise his mistakes and goes to talk to Ianto and explain why he acted like that and things were finally going so well they actually admitted they loved each other.

Oh I hope Jack can find someway of making Ianto see that he truly meant it when he said he loves him. I really hope that Jack doesn't end up like a zombie as Owen did.

I'm not surprised that Gwen took the chance to tell Jack she loved him, even though she knew that Ianto more than likely was going to say that but I'm glad Jack told Ianto he loved him. I do wonder if Jack is going to be a zombie or something different.

So sad. You're making me cry. As Sally said in Blink, "Sad is happy for deep people." It works.