I really like this, it's really sweet and subtle and very well written. You should write more with Ron and the Weasleys :)

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Wow, this was sad. I love seeing Weasley family bonding, and it was really sad and touching to see Mr Weasley having to comfort his son about killing. It brings to life the realities of war, so well done!

This was beautifully composed. It would be perfect but for the spelling and grammar errors. I really admire Arthur and his ability to be an incredible parent. You kept both Arthur and Ron in character and gave us a very poignant moment. Thanks for writing!

I really like this idea and the action between Arthur and Ron, good work.

I've always thought that Ron must've killed that DE even if he didn't mean to. Very good written indeed.

Oh.. wonderful. I love the maturity you bring to the characters, confronting the realities of war and making them beautifully human.

Two out of two I'm now impressed with! Welcome to fan fiction, by the way. It is always good to see a talented new writer who can produce original stories.

The paradox of war - fighting for peace, killing to save lives - was well captured.

I look forward to more of your work.

very cute, i enjoyed it! (: