I thought that this was really sweet ( :

Great work, as always. I liked it, though if that was the end, it was a little abrupt. I can't wait to read what else you come up with!

nice way of tying up the loose ends, it was an interesting story as not a style/subject that had been touched on before.

Great chapter

Nice job. I always love your stories, I'm sad to see this one end, but it was beautiful!

Great job with this! I definitely enjoyed this fic (:

Or... you could continue you and make this a pair fic with someone. The way you wrote it, it could be with Emily. I'm just saying. I would like to know what happened to the Kayla and Kaitie and whatnot. Just saying, you could go on, or make a sequal.

nice chapter that brought the rest of the team into the case, great portrayal of JJ, can imagine her being frustrated and wanting to do more, hope that the mother and child pull through

I love this story! update!

Great chapter! Really looking forward to more.

Love the way you're writing JJ's character. Ecstatic about this update. :)

great update. please do again really soon! lol

Yay you updated! Really great chapter! I hope they find this guy soon and all would be alright - is there a chance Kayla would actually survive?

WHOA! Definitely wasn't expecting this. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

I'm glad that they all managed to get out safely, although JJ was stubborn but luckily the fireman was there to help her. Hope that the team arrive soon to take some of the stress away from her and help her solve the case. Nice chapter.