I know it's been years but please do a sequel

please make a sequel

Thanks for the story.

So sweet. When a woman's fed up

Loved chapters 9&10. I shed a tear. Finally Mel , Derwin & Nia was a happy family . Also, your readers got closure, something the game writers did not do for their viewers.

Aww thanks for finishing it ! Can't wait to see what yu have coming up next !

Awww!

Great story wished the real game writers write like this good job.

Why isn't there more game stories in here? Like seriously that just pisses me off... -,-

I just found your story and I really love it. Derwin should feel bad.

Please update, hope derwin take care of his real family mel and nia . I really liked this story. Took me back to good days of the game tv show.

love it n thanks for updating i hope mel give him a chance

Good , glad they had a child together , unlike tv writers left them without. In your storyLike derwin put that itch janay in her place. . Only problem melanie bougie character would neva, neva name her child nia agape. Just sayin

Yay! You updated! This was so nice and sweet. I'm glad Derwin is starting to get his priorities together. I hope that he and Melanie can work it out sooner rather than later for the sake of their little Nia. And I love that DJ called Melanie Mama. So Cute! Please update soon!

Kisses doll xoxoxo

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Halle ;D

awww! how cute. lol it was like she was totally ignoring derwin. great chapter pls update soon!