still dont understand the need to provoke Naomi so bad this chapter

imagine naruto and mei's roles reversed, damn that lawsuit would come faster than i do

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Update

Great job please continue it

please update soon

Pls try to continue this fic... its has some minor errors and spelling mistakes... but the plot and storyline are amazing
- guest aka just a fan

This fic got great after the Mei's stunt. It's exactly things like this that are making characters alive. A pity you went missing after building such a big foundatiin in this fic.

In my personal opinion it's worse than Turbulent Tides, but could have gotten very close to it. It's just that you spent a lot of time to flesh out the world and just started to capitalize on it... So there's not as much to comment on.

As your general writing style, I've already commented on it in reviews to your other stories, so I won't repeat myself )

Man wish you still updated this story :(

When I read the intro my butthole shriveled up with excitement

weell 2 years and no update i really loved the story i honestly hope that you can finish it or put it up for adoption because you struck gold with the plot line here

Votes mei terumi

Update please.

Also will you please bring out Naomi feelings already.

Excellent story i really hope to see more updates on this so please continue

Please finish this. It's a great story