sigo enganchado, espero leer mas de las peleas callejeras, (el club de la pelea me encanto) y le da un toque de acción a la historia.
muy bien.

Hola, estoy enganchado, de verdad se nota que te gusta Isabel allende. muy bonita narrativa, y hasta ahora, en realidad quiero saber que hicieron. me gusta

hola me encanto tu finc, ya leí los extras pero creí que seria mejor si te comentaba este capítulo ya que es el epílogo...sus vidas después de la separación los cambiaron mucho y los llevaron a miles de peligros que tuvieron que enfrentar solos, una vez unidos sus vidas volvieron de a poco a ser las mismas que hace años atrás, tan solo necesitaban confianza y expresar lo que sentían... ame tu finc, fue muy emotivo :)

me encantooooo

empeze a leer primero I love the way you lie y despues mire esta historia y es buenisima! ... gracias!

Hellooooo again! Another great chapter! Very sad but in a very poetic way. I loved the songfic feel of it. :) And now we see the title of the story coming into play which is cool. I like how you showed how everyones farewells were done. I like the way you don't reaveal everything all at once. Its like every chapter unveils another part to the big secret, which makes it fun because it keeps up the suspense. I also like how you are giving us a really close up look at Rose and Emmett. They make such a great couple and that keeps you routing for them to get together. Keep up the great work girl! On to the next chapter! :)

Wooooooooooooow! It was the school! And I was like O.o when I saw there was a death list. :( The names on the list were so sad too. You did a really good job showing everyones regret and sadness from the event that took place. I could really feel how haunted they all were through your writing. Very full of feeling and descriptively written. I don't know how I could go on living with myself knowing there were deaths caused from it. :( But Charlie forgave her for leaving for all those years! Thats great! The conversation between the two of them was so sweet. If only he knew the truth of why she had to leave. That she wasn't being cruel on purpose. Great job girl! Great job! Now on to the next chapter!

woooooooooooooooooooooow! That was amazing! So all along it was just a really horrible accident that they were running away from Forks for. Ohhhh man! I can only imagine how bad they all felt about it! But it really was just an accident with the fireworks. :( Its not like any of them meant for the disaster to happen. I liked how you showed the whole scene from every ones point of view. It was really cool to see it from everyones perspective. Wow wow wow! Finally I know the big secret! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! hahahahahaha On to chapter 10! A

Wow I can't believe Jake is being so...well...Jake. Hahahah Okay well I guess I can believe it. Lol I cant really blame him for being jealous though. It's obvious Bella and Edward both still have feelings for one another. I loved the scene between Ness and Jacob. The tension between them was hilarious! The “bigfoot” touch was funny! And WOW at the part about Jasper backing out on his promise to Alice. Very sneaky! But like he said, “It is more dangerous for him not to”. I hope he and Alice work it out. Oh man and its looking like we are getting closer and closer to finding out the BIG SECRET about why they all parted and left Forks in the first place. I can't wait to find out! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

lol the part about Edward not being able to hold his alcohol and getting a little toasted was funny! “Im not drunk. Im just dizzy.” That would SO be an excuse he would come up with. Hahahaha! And I totally forgot about Ness sweet talking him into moving in with her in an apartment of their own. That was sooooo sweeeeeet how Edward just knew from the very first that Ness was the one. I like how you made his first impression wrong. Hahaha it shows how even Edward can be wrong when judging a book by its cover. But it did in the end turn out for the best though. I can tell from your writing that he wouldn't trade his little sis for anything in the world. And Ok Ok Ok I gotta say it...The whole scene with Jasper was hooooooooooott! hahahahaha That was very well written and I love how you teased the reader. Its like I didn't know what to expect next. Lol it was wonderful. I was like nooooooooooo at the end when he took the respectful approach. hahahahaahah But the way it ended with them hugging and him using his southern accent calling her ma'am was just adorable. I cant say I didn't looove the ending it had! It was very characteristic of Jasper to be a gentleman.

Wow! I can't believe poor Bella went through all that! The poor girl! It's like that scene in Port Angeles played out without Edward showing up. Wow! I would also like to complement you on your writing style in this particular area as well. You did such a great job showing the true horror of the situation without getting waaaay too graphic and scarring the reader. Hahaha! But, in the same instance, you also didn't sacrifice the detail either. You described it well and brought Bella's nightmare to life, right there on the paper! Great job, girl! A

este realmente sera el fin del fin del final xD

es que cada cap creo que todo acabo y siempre sigues con mas capitulos

mil besos bye

Fran

DIII0S!

SIMPLEMENTE ME HA ENCANTADO. EL FINAL ME HA GUSTADO MUCHO Y MIRA QUE AL PRINCIPIO PENSABA QUE HABÍA MUERTO LA BEBE, PERO NO. ME DA MUCHA PENA QUE SE ACABE, ES UNO DE LOS FICS QUE MÁS ME HAN GUSTADO Y LO VOY A ECHAR DE MENOS. PERO YA ESPERO QUE ACTUALICES ESE NUEVO DE ROSE Y EMMETT, PORQUE ME MUERO POR LEER.

UNBESOOOO(KK'

PD: FELICIDADES POR EL MAGNIFICO FIC.

WOOOOW sigo qon el nudo en la gargantaa :$1!

realmente pense qe la bb habia muertooo ):

lo buenoo qe no, sufri junto qon rosee D!

me enqanto el capituloo!

y espero qon muchas anasias leer el nuevo fic (:*

q cosa tan extraña como q hubo cosas k no entendi

xfin poniendme al corrnt q raro lo d alice y jazzy pero ps muy bn q iiaaa esten bn y juntos!

xoxo