Loved all of it xx

okay... this seems to be coming from someone who really hates TVD in which case I don't know why you made a crossover with it.

Normally I can't cut out of a story in the middle, so I tried to keep going, hoping it would get better. But Bella is still completely ruined by turning her into a real bitch, (I mean giving her some back bone is one thing but this just makes her into a really unlikable person), and all the main VD people are having their characters dragged through the mud.

So I just am not going to force myself to finish this, just can't.

This 'Bella' is such a bitch... I'm actually hoping Damon eats her.

technically Damon wouldn't be feeling much of anything Bella did to him, because it doesn't really hurt them to be hit by a human. Reference some of the earliest episodes, there is one where Damon gets in Stefan's head to give him nightmares and Stefan wakes up and stabs him with a letter opener. He doesn't even flinch. A few episodes later they were playing football and Stefan tackled Damon, he mentioned it actually hurt, because he was on Stefan's 'bunny diet' ie it doesn't normally hurt to be hit that hard.

Wow Damon in this fic is a manipulative asshole worse than Edward I can't imagine what will change to make Bella end up with him at this rate, he's vile

What. The. actual. Frick?

I LOVE IT

I loved this so much, thank you for sharing

I do love your story, I'm just annoyed that Bella let the Cullen worm their way back in. my mum left me and my sister we never knew where she was for 4 years then she came waltzing back into our lives expecting us to forgive her. you don't forgive those who abandon you. And the whole I trust Alice thing their all clueless Alice's power works with decisions so trusting it is useless. I am not trying to he negative at all cause I do like your story

I loved this so much! You’re an amazing writer & honestly I can’t wait to see what else you’ve come up w!

This went from funny to kinda romantic to drama & tbh I can’t gdt ebough

LMAO this just keeps getting better and better

Okay so I honestly didn’t think I was going to like this story, just because I’m not one to like an angry bella, but I love this! Honestly the interactions are so funny I can’t wait to see where this goes

Ok

Please make a part two of the story. I would love to see what happens next