HOLY CRAP.
I love this. Perfect.
Sad ending tho.

wow. this is amazing! im going to go read the sequel now!

o god why you ended

Chase i disappointed in you. Allowing raimundo to kiss kimiko!

OMFGOMFG I LOVE YOU. I can't wait to read the sequel. This is so beautifully tragic. You're a very talented writer and I know you'll go far. Can you maybe add Chamiko into the sequel to get Rai steaming? ;)- Much love

At the start of this I was thinking this was going to be a Kimiko and Chase pairing and I was content with that. Though now, I hope to god it's not because of how much I want Raimundo and her together now.

You are one awesome and amazing writer I can't wait to read the sequal!

Dam now that is one hell of a story. Why is this one so much better then others invalving a dragon falling to darkness?

cool story

I LOVED THIS STORY!

THE END! THE END! WHY! LOL I LOVED this story. But, that's the greatest thing about sequels huh?

YAY, I'm going to read the sequel now!

Typical jack

So cool

wow... just wow. That was amazing! I'm going to read the sequel right now.

I'm loving this! This is a fangirl's dream come true right now (despite the rape... wasn't expecting that, but i could easily over look it with how great everything else was.) Everyone was in character perfectly. And i felt extremely sorry for Raimundo in the end. :(

Keep up the amazing work! :D

interesting... very interesting.

Chase/Kimiko was my dream pairing when this show was on, and i only recently found out there was a section for this. i will definitely continue reading. :)