Reviews for Voyage of the Dawn Treader: My Version
Snowsandstars chapter 22 . 1/23
Why didn't Lucy use the cordial?
Snowsandstars chapter 11 . 1/23
Where is Eustace?
Spare Oom chapter 15 . 12/26/2018
This is a truly amazing story!
Sarah zitter chapter 30 . 11/21/2018
I love this story please make a sequel to this story by making Queen Lucy pregnant with Caspian baby or babies please.
SubtleMaterials chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
I loved it!
SubtleMaterials chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
Oh my god! Such a good story! This is deffinetly how The Dawn Treader should have ended!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
Lucy has blue eyes...not hazel thought you should know. Love it other than that.
SplashSJQ chapter 30 . 1/23/2017
Love ️ love ️ love ️ the story. This is how the dawn treder should have ended!
twlightbella chapter 30 . 8/5/2016
Aww happy ending
twlightbella chapter 26 . 8/5/2016
Aww
DarkJewel55 chapter 7 . 4/18/2016
oh my god, seriously, wow! the fluff! the fluff! I'm dying here, i swear my brain has turned to mush! i can't think of anything but 'awww'. and do you know that ridiculous happiness you feel sometimes? that blinding powerful emotion, makes you overflowing with it? like you're on cloud nine? complete with crazy grin and squinty eyes and occasional wobbly smile? that's how i feel right now. and with a the crap going on in my life right now, i rarely get to feel like this... thank you so much... Love, A. xxx
elsamaryklmt chapter 30 . 6/22/2015
Oh my goodness! I am blushed and sort of "heated" and it's like 2:24 p.m! I really love ya! Your story was amazing and mentioning that you could have a sequel to this ,about how lucy and caspian live with their end with,you are wonderful and gifted!
boringandannoying chapter 28 . 3/9/2015
Ugh Annabella's the worst
Guardian Dragomir chapter 30 . 9/17/2014
I really love this story! And I will definately read the next story, of course! I have a question, how many visitors and vieuws do you have on this story? becouse I'm writing my own Narnia Fanfic, and I would like to know how many readers you have! Lots of Love! xoxoxox
Morgan Nicholas Maric chapter 30 . 7/27/2014
I hate to sound like a prat, dearie, but I feel I need to address something about your lovemaking scene; first-time sex is not supposed to hurt. I would suggest looking into it more yourself, I don't really have the time, but the hymen, that "virginal" bit in the woman, can relax and stretch. The pain-during-the-first-sex thing is a myth. I did it the first time I wrote anything along these lines as well, but just keep that in mind, alright?
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