That was by far one of the best stories I've ever read. Definitely in my top 3

Ooh! Ok that caught my atention. Since it's usually Lenny the center of the more romantic approach in fanfic (that I've seen) so it's really gratifying to see Lino get some atention, gotta love his character.

There's a grammatical error here and there but overall the story is pretty well-written, nice job!

I would be your best friend forever if you update this.

Lino: Boo.

Aria: *blushing* Hi yourself.

Pitbull Almighty, can you try and do Open Season stories?

Update please :) can't wait to see what happens next!

Update please :) can't wait to see what happens next!

"Boo." - That whole thing... my favourite part. ;)

I really think It's time for another chapter now. I could help you if you want, (I've been writing stories since I was eight). :)

This is real deep... :O I never actually though I'd take a liking to something sexual like this, but I actually love this story. I thinks it's really dark and rather alluring in places.

Rather unexpectedly, I love it.

You should be pleased with this chapter! It's amazing I love your writing skills, I'm so jealous xD

Keep it coming! :D

P.S Sorry I ain't reviewed for a while, school work was in the way :(

So far so good, you have a promising fan fic on your hands. I also like how each character has their own way of talking and a unique personality. You have just the right balance or action, romance, and dialogue.

For future chapters I hope to see a little more descriptions on surroundings and characters, as in how it kind of looks.

Keep up the good work hon! I'll think of ways to help you along!

~ Dark

(Dark-Fantasy-Farms of DA)

Lol I LOVED the club scene where Lino and Lenny had that dance off with the brooms! Keep up the good work!

I don't think this chapter is crappy. I know what you mean by that tho. You think it won't get much attention cuz it's not very actiony, long, or thrilling. I've had that feeling about some chapters in my stories too, but then the chapter gets a lot of people saying, "Oooh, I NEED to know what happens next." And I can honestly say this chapter is no different than that. I do, seriously, need to know what happens next!

This isn't the end, right? I mean this is awesome! I love Lenny's comfort to Aria...:)

Ah, finally found it, my friend Pure-madness-x was telling me about this story and I gotta admit, she was right! This is great, beautiful start and great use of words :)

And yeah, why are you here xox-prada4eva-xox? You shouldn't have the right to review other stories, well since you did, I hope you took some notice of this persons work, this is a real Shark tale fic, unlike yours.

Update Please! :D

Again brilliant, I hope you are continuing as I write xD

And what the hell is xox-prada4eva-xox doing here? Shouldn't you be re-writing your fail-fiction?