Reviews for Hiromi |
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camillachesebro chapter 1 . 9/1/2013 Is Sadako Inoue an OC? I've read a lot of your stories and really like Sadako. I'm just wondering about her character. She reminds me of a school nurse from a really random anime. |
EJ Daniels chapter 20 . 6/25/2012 This entire story was worth reading if no other reason than to just read Yumi’s farewell address. Please understand, the entire story was masterfully done just as I would expect from you, however Yumi’s speech was just so incredibly perfect and spot on that I think it nearly outshined the entire story by itself. Very well done! Well done indeed! Kind Regards, EJ Daniels |
romancejunky chapter 20 . 4/29/2011 I wept'd through the last chapter as though my own heart was breaking. I believe that you have a great story here and I am glad that I took the time to read this wonderful piece. I will be rereading this for years to come I know that. |
insomniac1970 chapter 20 . 3/2/2011 While I am sad that this story is over, I really like how you tied up all the loose ends. A happy ending is never bad. You also gave us a hint for the future of the Hiromi/Tsutako pairing. I would love to see the wedding by the way. Thanks for all your hard work. I am really looking forward to Rosa Chinesis! |
diabolicalBITCH15 chapter 20 . 3/2/2011 nice ending my friend.. hehehe.. You are a prodigy can't really think how the hell did you came up with such ending? hahaha... i love it much.. can't wait for the next fic of yours... and can't wait for you to amaze me again... |
teufelchen29 chapter 20 . 3/2/2011 Many many thanks for this story. I find you can credit very much, pleases me about other stories of you |
insomniac1970 chapter 19 . 2/27/2011 Thanks for updating! Yeah, I knew that he was going to be exposed soon. I just feel bad for Yoshino that this was the way that she had to find out. I never liked Mami or Minako, so it's too bad that Mami was there. I kinda hope that you give Hiromi an Otoboku ending rather than a Hanazakari no Kimitachi e (Hana Kimi, a manga/drama about a girl pretending to be a boy in an all-male school) where he gets to stay. Once again, you pack this chapter with a lot of heart and it's enjoyable to read. I'm sad that the next chapter is the last, but all good things must come to an end. Peace! |
insomniac1970 chapter 18 . 2/24/2011 That was a very nice chapter! I especially loved Yumi's flirty remark to Youko that left Sei speechless. That was epic! It's not often that any of the girls one-upped Sei and it's nice to see. Once again though, this was due to Yumi's growing confidence, maturity, and poise that she is learning from Sachiko. I do agree with Rei about Nana. I think that she will handle Yoshino quite well. Maybe someone will explore that in a story down the road. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
teufelchen29 chapter 18 . 2/24/2011 this chapter was wonderfully written again, above all I like it like you Yumi so self-confidently has explained and the Sachiko more and more from himself out comes. Am already curious if the others find out the Hiromi a boy is. Continue thus :-) I love this story |
diabolicalBITCH15 chapter 18 . 2/23/2011 that was amazing.. god i love this chapter... hehehe.. please update soon... |
insomniac1970 chapter 17 . 2/21/2011 Thanks for updating! This could have been a really sad chapter as many as the fics with Sachiko graduating are. However, you kept it light and fun, which allows for more heart and less angst. You provide the readers with an insight to the depth of love that the characters have for each other: grande soeur to petite soeur, petite soeur to grande soeur, friend to friend, girlfriend to girlfriend, boyfriend to girlfriend, and girlfriend to boyfriend. You have captured each of these relationships very well. By the way, I rolled like Shimako when Touko said, "Not all Roses are gay Oneesama!" That was hilarious considering the story and the characters. And yes, I have ALWAYS liked the Touko/Yuuki pairing. Of course, Yoshino and Yuuki would be interesting too, if Yoshino was straight, which have doubts about. She would definitely keep him in line. LOL!I really enjoyed this chapter, and I'm looking for to the next one! |
teufelchen29 chapter 17 . 2/20/2011 again fantastically written thank you |
diabolicalBITCH15 chapter 17 . 2/20/2011 wow that was a nice speech... love it much... please continue... can't wait... thanks for the update... hope you update soon... |
teufelchen29 chapter 16 . 2/20/2011 Now thank you for the chapter, how you want to go on, this the whole 4 staffel was compact, now you write your own 5 relays if so I am curious sometimes like it goes on |
insomniac1970 chapter 16 . 2/16/2011 Thanks for updating! This chapter kinda felt like you tried to cram the whole 4th season in one chapter. It worked, but some readers might feel rushed. I realize that you probably have bigger fish to fry in this story (like some more Tsutako/Hiromi loving!). Keep up the good work! |