I came 12 times while reading this. 10/10

Aww, no more. That makes me sad. I was really enjoying this. :(

Actually, if you watch the toothbrush scene again and watch the picture of Metro Man in the background, I think you'll notice something. When Megamind holds his collar up, he's trying to make it look like the Metro Man in the picture has grabbed onto it. That explains his expression at the end. It took me a few times to figure it out.

This is so good! You're not just rewriting the movie, you're addingmore personality to it. Great job :)

i looove all the added scenes; it makes the stroy even more awesome!

Great chapter, and I love how you included the toothbrush scene.

You are an fantastic author.

I love it,please continue:)

This is really good :) I like the things you've added, and I can't wait to see what you do next :)

Good! I've seen works like these or tasks like these being done. I'm glad you've taken this movie as a project to do! I believe it takes enormous amount of time and effort to do the movie verse while filling in the blank moments when the camera is not on their face. It will be interesting turn out indeed. I will be waiting.

The other movie I was reffering to was x-men... Trouble with weather by I'm-a-quitter which got about over 800 reviews. So yes. I believe this has potential and can make it big time given enough time and effort.

Please continue and keep it up!

-KolBrdn

haha, favorite lines:

"How absolutely primitive of them-why don't they just use a disintegrator ray to reduce them to their atomic compounds?"

"Well, sir, not everyone has access to the chillingly horrifying inventions that you have created."

I'd be happy to beta read

I'd be happy to beta read

aw, I love this. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

Hey, I'm happy to beta read for you, if you want.

~Your Worshipfulness

I really enjoyed this. I look forward to seeing what you have to offer. Post soon :)