I liked the chapter!

omg-.- its far too canon which is why its so unrealistic. Just imagine, one robot is made to build a second robot who than also builts robots which than go mining asteroids or moons for even more robots... do you not see the pattern? in 20 years humans should have simply adapted... also why must the normandy have to be made between turians and humans? -.- its like someone political brainwashed wrote this fic...

Wow, you unironically mentioned the three laws. I take it you haven't actually read any of Asimov's woks then?

This is a great story and it's executed exceptionally well, however I have noticed that in every chapter unto now that there have been times, within a single chapter, where a sentence has abruptly cut off. The story merely continued from that abrupt cut-off sentence as if there was actually something written there but there isn't. I'm assuming that in the editing process, these things were sinply forgotten but for readers like me, it is really confusing trying to figure out what you were trying to say. Could you please re-read your story and finish those in complete sentences as I suspect that there is more to come in the succeeding chapters.

when the a.i. did the or I will kill you thing I laughed

Sorry, extremely disappointing!
After a badass introductory chapter the follow up feels like a let down. Drop to the me game level with all the lame shenanigans. A mess...
Not to my taste, sorry.

That was completely retarded as the next chapter. You go from your setup to suddenly everything is back on track for ME timeline with no explanation, just starting. Retarded. I stopped after trying to make sense of this incoherent mess.

This is interesting fanfiction for several reasons. First is that humanity is an outcast and a very violent and paranoid one. Like a space Iran/North Korea with AIs being like relegious leaders that have extraofinary power.

Second is Shepard, who I love here. He has no concept of things like freedom or day to day behaviour, and is amazing to read him cope with it.

Splendid fanfic, keep it coming.

Gah. This is worse than a govt. shutdown.

I hate you.

Well, maybe.

Just a little.

Heh. Good luck and enjoy yourself in your various endeavors. I'd say it was fun, but you are a twisted SoB. ;)

Tevos is the asari councillor and has been for several centuries

is this story abandoned? i really hope not its one of my favorites.

normqlly with a story this good i would request that you continue writing this but since youve got some other active fics going on that are just as good if not better could you please share your notes/storyboard/plans for this story if you do not plan on finishing it?

yay for liara the actual archeologist instead of liara the shy blue girl yay for therum with a point beyond picking up a love interest who has no impact on the story!

shepards classy driving skills deserve a medal, stunts like that make me wish the other games had driving segments with even crazier stunts to pull

warp the plot willy nilly, weve all played the game, you dont need to describe in game events

garrus as settled nicely into the second in command role, it would be cool to see his perspecive on things

wrex is inherently badass, dont change him

talimance is progressing and its really cool to see a shep who is just as naiive as tali, if not moreso