Horseshit.

It is a very good story, I hope you continue it soon, see you, greetings, bye!

Does anyone know other stories, where Naruto is kind of an nobody? Was re-reading the fic, and enjoyed how he was considered average

Is "Sage" Edolas Naruto, right? Oh boy i hope everyone kill that stupid old Edolas King when they get close him... Im happy that you updated X3 BTW i hope you will do update when its get ready :D

nice

Boring. I quit.

Yay she finally died! I'm so happy! Don't be sad Naruto-sama, Mira-sama will comfort you later

Cool! Naruto-sama a perfect match for Mira-sama!

Just die already Yuna.

Just fucking kill Yuna Already! Damn it.

Okay, look...I understand the whole Dark Power gives you problems thing. BUT COME ON! It seems that you are making Naruto pathetic and weaker than before!. Damn it all to hell, from this chapter he had lots of difficulties when in reality he should had not. You are following the Fairy Tail Event Timeline, I know but don’t make Naruto weaker to suit the storyline.

update please. ive been waiting for a long long time. i really like your story

Great chapter. I really hope you are still writing for this story! I look forward to future updates.

Excellent. Perfect. Brilliant. Loved naruto's speech.

O.O That was one weird intro. The place where naruto was at the start just didn't have the feeling of the Elemental Nations.(I'm pretty sure that's what it's called).

I came back to this story a second time just because of how good it is. Especially in a much more mature and dark environment. Keep up the good work!