Oh, now this is AU, definitely-was the turning point the Shrieking Shack? (and I have my doubts if those two are really the top Aurors-perhaps in their own minds, and self-defense is murder if a Gryffindor attacks. You're just supposed to die, I guess, if that happens).

And James has talked himself out of being in love with Lily Evans, after all those years that Sirius remembers and James really wants to pretend to forget.

Sounds like neither one has married (most of their generation have noticed those two are wed to each other, very likely).

Wish you would continue this...

Why is he still an Auror if he's known to habitually abuse his authority. Money, connections, blackmail?

(PS Where's Wormy in this AU?)

Canon-Snape believed the werewolf incident was planned by all the marauders, and I think the evidence is slightly in his favour (IOW, he's right). But in this world the incident might not even have been deliberate. Given that the only obstacle seems to have been the Willow rather than any locked doors, maybe Lupin-wolf escaped by himself.

Canon-Lily wasn't with Snape during the werewolf prank, so the different turn this world took must have happened even before then.

Hmm, do most wishes on that thing go this way? (In which case, it really wasn't a good present, and you have to wonder at the motivation of the chap who gave it to him.).

Forgot to specify that they believe you, didn't you, Harry? (If only that was the only thing you forgot.)

He hasn't learned much in 100 years, has he? (Maybe that's what comes of picking Gryffindor over Slytherin...)

Not sure what I think, really interesting concept, well written, you have the odd mistake, but nothing serious. I am just hoping that something good comes through Severus, Harry and Lily, they see Harry is honest, maybe he can help them a little

Thus is so very unique, please return and continue this incredible storyline.

Interesting premise for a story. I think it is too bad that your story has not continued. I think it would be interesting to see how Harry and the Snape's interact with each other as they get to know one another.

A very misogynistic story, if I ever saw one... All the female characters are evil, sexual predators with no intelligence, ambition or love, except for Mrs Evans, the sterotypical church going sahm...
Severus is incredibly overpowered...a child genius that is always right, and has very odd conversations in his head...
Why does your Severus want Lily anyway? He doesn't like her...that is pretty clear, he doesn't lust after her...is it simply a matter of control?
Severus always goes to the exact worst interpretation of anything Lily says or does...that is going to make for a wonderful life...
The author shows writing skills, but the underlying emotional story is concerning. If you were one of my students, I would refer you to counseling.

one of worst stories on ff net

You know what I wish for? You delete your account. All your stories are crappy. :(

dumb

worst. your writing stinks.