| Reviews for Of Wayward Ships and Breathtaking Birds |
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   MissLozzieB1049 chapter 5 . 2/3/2013 Keep Going, I love this story |
| USAFChief chapter 5 . 10/12/2012 Okay, Alivia, this is me pestering you to update this story! You have not posted anything to it in over a year and it is high time for you to get on the ball and post something. You do your readers and yourself an disservice to leave this the way it is. It is much to good to just discard it like yesterday's trash. |
| Woody2792 chapter 5 . 5/10/2012 Looking gooood! Update soon please :) |
| FrancesBell chapter 5 . 11/20/2011 Hey! Great story, but you left it on a bit of a cliff-hanger. Are you going to post another chapter, because I would really like to find out how this would end |
| Aquasm chapter 5 . 5/26/2011 Very original story, well done please update soon! |
| gladiatorRED chapter 5 . 5/4/2011 Somebody needs to update this story! Lol wat happans next? hurry up and update ) |
| random chapter 5 . 4/2/2011 want to know what happens! update soon! |
| LittleHogwartsGirl chapter 5 . 4/2/2011 It took me a while to understand who Jenny was talking to in MTAC, but then it clicked xD Great work, I love Amelie (she's cute!) and the story is progressing nicely. Please update as soon as you can! Love, Katie |
| aliiahncisxx chapter 4 . 2/23/2011 update soon x :) |
| LittleHogwartsGirl chapter 4 . 2/21/2011 Great! I love the characterization, Tim really acts like, well, Tim and I can hear the voices in my head. (That might be a sign of schizofrenia, though.) Awesome job and I hope for you to update soon! :D |
| Radafa chapter 4 . 2/20/2011 Good call on McGee doing the interview. He's the only one that might be a little impartial. But poor Probie, he knows too much any how. The kid seems really bright, I like her :) The bit with Tony and Ziva at the end was interesting. I can't wait to see their reactions when the truth comes out! |
| LyssLovesSnowing33 chapter 4 . 2/20/2011 This story is very interesting and I love it... I also discovered that you are only 12 and... I remember people telling me I was a good writer at 13 (and I wasn't, I know they just liked the plot) but at 12 you are so much better than I was... Please update soon! |
| DiNUTZzo chapter 4 . 2/20/2011 Great chapter can't wait to see where this goes, fantastic chapter and keep it up! |
| lucky c.a chapter 4 . 2/20/2011 oooh what an ending! here comes the drama! can't wait to read. update soon! |
| LittleHogwartsGirl chapter 3 . 1/24/2011 Gorgeous. I like that you actually dare to bring Jeanne in the story - most NCIS fanfic writers somehow don't dare to write about our favorite international arms dealer's daughter because she's pretty hated. Loving the story! :D |
