I wish you would finish this storyit is so different from a lot of stories

I’m reference to chapter 18- What an awful place to leave us hanging! Please please please come back to this!

When are you going to update this story? I really love it and I want to know what happens!

Oh, you will never finish this beautifull and so well written story?

Are you not updating anymore because I absolutely love this story is haven't seen a lot like it thanks for writing it

One of the things that confused me about the story was the difference between the condition of Edward's apartment and that of Jasper's. Jasper sounds like he lives in a slum all shabby and dirty whereas Edward's apartment is clean with new apppliances. They don't seem to even live in the same building. Also Edward seems to have a thriving catering business, which is odd unless the laws are that different in Seattle but I don't think you're allowed to use your personal kitchen for commercial cooking. That sure isn't permitted in my stste.

This was a nice story however sfter three years I haven't much hope of ever knowing the ending. I guess I'll ck back in six months or so otherwise I will regretfully add your nane to my list of authors not to bother reading. That you are connected with misty hazes doesn't give me much hope of ever knowing the ending. Good luck to you in whatever is going on in RL for you. I guess i have no one to blame but myself. I knew this was last updated in 2012 so I can't imagine why I would start reading in the first place.

That was sweet hot smexy but also so tender and poignant. Loved it a lot. Great writing

Omg that was so sad. Poor Jasper poor Riley so tragic. How very dreadful for Jasper to have lived through that. And Edward so accepting and loving. Very sad tragis chapter yet heartwarming at the end.

Good for Jasper I'm so happy he stood up to that fucker. I'm just afraid for what his "long arm" of corruption and evil is capable of doing. I don't mind a little angsy but I sur hope the innocents aren't gonna be sacrificed.

Oh wow where did that come from why was there no hint of that dear dear. Poor Jasper.

That was a cute chapter meeting Bella and getting together for their gay movie night. So poignant meeting Sam's parents. I forget which one is Sam. Very worried about this James business. Really worried actually.

Wow that was intense. Poor Jasper what a horrible dream.

Wow did he really do something like that to wind up in prison or did his subconscious pull that up to make him afraid to be around Edward?

Poor Jasper what a horrible life he seems to have had aside from prison it sounds like a tragic life. Ryan doesn't appeal at all but that's neither here nor there. Love Edward's adorable comment about spanking too cute for words.