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Oh my, update update update! But Little Guy seems a bit OOC; he's crying too much and giving up too much. He would be fighting back, cussing, and yelling at people. Was he working for the Delphi the whole time? Doesn't Naomi feel a bit betrayed that he's still working with them?

This is amazing! I love it, everyone is perfectly in character, the dialogue is priceless, and no annoying grammer issues! Keep up the good work please :)

Um, courtroom.

I don't know who defense would call. Naomi and some people who worked with him at the FBI.

Although prosecution might try them too. And Derek and Blackwell probably.

I noticed the Phoenix Wright reference in there, very clever.

I am really enjoying this story. I keep thinking I know what's going to happen and then, BOOM I'm way wrong. I love how you incorporated the old characters into the story, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter :)

Little Guy seemed kind of OOC. Gabe was well done, but LG seemed a little too violent and stuff. Seems as if your story has gotten sidetracked from the 'parenthood' aspect. But still, I'm interested in learning what will come next.

Meh. It was paced really fast, and Little Guy waaaas a little too angry, too obsessed...

But you did Gabe really well. :) I'll be looking forward to more.

Little Guy was sort of OOC (in my book), but Gabe was just fine. I found him very funny here.

This was an interesting chapter, and I can't wait to find out what the problem is, but don't forget that your story is supposed to focus on "Adjusting to Parenthood."

Mannsss! Hopefully Little Guy's name will be cleared and return to the FBI office :D I can't imagine Camilla TOUCHING Little Guy, he'd be so damn pissed off. XD Love it, though. :)

Ha! I'm glad to see that Naomi is still able to make people shut up! :)

And thumbs up for Gabe who is having a hard time with Naomi's ideas! :)

Camilla is EXACTLY THE SAME as Victor. Twins! In personality, of course.

~mf

I love that this is going to be an actual case, so much. And Little Guy, you suck at lying, stop doing it.

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...basic human rights?

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ONE week. Serious? Have they forgotten about something called "human rights"? Or is this a Guatemalan secret American prison?