please update your story

This would make a fantastic story, all it needs is more chapters, a coherent plot line, and (because I'm a Grammar Nazi) better grammar.

Ooooookay I wish Isabella and Phineas were not the same animal, and a different animal at that. But overall good story

yes, very random

dear hi, I am soo using that idea later on in the story. THANK YOU! or maby in a different story... either way, im going to use it :D

did you know that if female ferrets go into heat and cannot find a mate, they'll die? what if isabella goes into heat? guess who else is a ferret... great phinabella!

oh yes, very random XD. can't wait for the next chap!

Wow.

This is just... I can't even comprehend it.

Ever heard of My Immortal? It's a notoriously bad Harry Potter fanfic. Chech it out. Even if you know next to nothing about Harry Potter, the sheer absurdity of the thing should be woth a chuckle or two. Anyway, there are a few theories as to what the auther was thinking when she wrote it. Some think it's genuine, while others think it was intentionally bad. But there's another theory that is just as likely as the rest, which is that the auther started seriously, then realized it was hilariously awful and wrote the rest of the story hilariously awfully.

That's what you should do. I'm being serious here. On the one hand, this story has a ridiculous plot, weak spelling and grammar, and some hints that it might be a love story - in other words, if's a fairly typical fanfic. But you can do so much more with this, if only you tried to fail. Then it would be hilarious. It would grab other people's attention. And - dare I say it - it would be something I'd actually consider worth reading.

Go forth and be an idiot. It'll be worth it in the end.

not bad my friend I've come to love your one-shots

It ain't that bad, actually it's pretty continue. ou have my blessing. lol just kidding XD

Interesting Story! I like how both Phineas and Isabella got rings. LOL :)