This story is so mysterious! I hooe you continue this!

Will you continue this story? It's really beautiful I fell in love with this story.

draco's married to luna!?

that was only six people not seven...

YES GO HERMIONE YESSSSSSSSSSS

Sign my name fandomhope

"Seven people actually knew that she was the one who killed Ron, Bill, Charlie, Ginny, Fred, George and Luna."
I think you've got to make this clear. It looks like Hermione killed all of them or did she really? I just needed to tell you. But seeing as how far the chapters go, I think it's unnecessary already.

Bloody hell! You killed Ron! Ha! serves him right! and I love Hermione!

Really, He hasn't seen harry yet or what? Doesn't he recognize the eyes and hair?

You are brilliant, I mean you're just making this fic ooze with mystery and I'm itching to know the truth!

Let me ask, What point are you in this story. I mean timeline? Or is this an AU but the same Dark vs. light scenario? And hasn't he seen Harry already to know that Harry has the same Emerald eyes and raven hair?
That's all I needed to ask but overall, Nice start!

Please do go back and fix your tenses; they're quite messed up and it degrades on the overall quality of the book. It is also quite annoying, having to constantly change the tenses. If it was just one or two, it'd be fine and I wouldn't be writing this, but it seems like the tense changes every other word or whenever a tense is required.
I would very much appreciate it if you took the time to do that, or even just got a beta reader if you don't want to.
Thank you for your consideration,
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Haha. Care that was Angela. Hello and I am still following your fics archiveofourown... Yay! -Gibi

Hoy babae! Hahaha. Wala lang. Thank you doon sa words na binigay mo sa akin nung braintrain. Btw, magrefresher ka?- Lara (aka your bt seatmate).

Its been almost a year and you haven't updated this. Nevertheless, I will wait for as long as when it would take you to post the remaining chapters.

-wm

This is interesting. Bar the grammar discrepancies but I think you should continue this work. I've read up to chapter 4 only but I personally think this has potential.

I love your writing style!

-wm