Okay wait I just realized...also, *spoiler* for anyone who hasn’t read the whole thing yet

Angela’s Ashes. (It’s the title of an amazing true story that was a book and has a movie btw about the hardships of a poor family).

I wished you did a Dally POV! Wouldn't that be great? We all know what Danni's emotions and thoughts are but what about the tough boy who hasn't learned to love?

! Like the first chapter... you wrote it well :)

I've re read this story so many times! It reminds me of "Robbers" by The 1975, (I know it's based off LTWYL anyways but ya know) and I love the dynamics of Danni and Dally's relationship. You've portrayed the relationship ins very realistic way, and you're an extremely talented writer! :)

Beautiful

Well I did it, I reread the first book again. You are beyond talented and I adore you. This story continues to linger in my mind long after I finish the last chapter and i am completely in love with it. I very much enjoyed it and was I moved, entertained, touched and again I just completely fell in love. You write Dallas Winston so perfectly and manage to keep him in character while at the same time give him character development and a romance which sadly very few writer seem to be able to do let alone do as well as you. Danni is a breathtaking Oc that I root for, relate to and love. You do complete justice to the original story of the Outsiders and expanded on the world and characters wonderfully.

Nearly finished rereading the first story again loved every second of it.

You do a very good job of writing sex scenes, it's something that doesn't always get done well in fan fiction but you are a pro.

This is a very well done ending to the chapter.

Well done can't praise you enough.

Haha Gotta love Two-bit don't you?

Poor Angela she didn't deserved what happened to her, and poor Tim.

Love the song. This is a wonderful chapter.

Love this chapter so much. You create such tension.

Perfect chapter with perfect writing.