loved your story thank you for writing and posting it

The base plot was very good and I enjoyed it immensely. However, there were a lot of things that were inconsistent, so I was often confused about what was going on in the story. A quick remedy to the inconsistencies is to make sure that what you have written in any new chapters is consistent with all of your previous chapters. (in other words reread your story over and over). When you are writing it, it sounds fine and there are no problems. However, as a reader who is binge reading it gets frustrating when there are inconsistencies left and right.
Whenever you do decide to make a change, it would be prudent to go back to previous chapters and edit them to match any and all changes. I know its a lot of work but it helps make your story flow.
Other than that I really loved this story! This last chapter really hit me in the feels! Thank you for writing such a great piece!

I'm crying this was so amazing

man... a heartbreaking ending. made me cry. Happens rarely with fanfiction stories. thank you for the wonderful story and impressive writing.

you should add a reincarnation chapter maixjohn

I loved your story. It was heartbreaking but still written incredibly well.

totally occ
I would have liked an eccentric pairing but it's boring

Omg the feels! Such a good story.

*SOB SOB SOB SOB SOB* WHYYYYYY *MORE SOBBING*

I'm balling my eyes out. I really loved ur story. Ur a wonderful writer don't let anyone tell u differently. Imma get my sister to read this cuz I loved it so much.

Well that broke my heart and crushed my soul to pieces

That was beautiful

OMG. So originally I read this anonymously because I was too lazy to login.

I read it the first time. - Depression for over 3 weeks.

Second time- I read this last chapter to a friend of mine who was hysterically bawling inside. On the other hand, I was bawling like a baby for 1 1/2 hours straight.

I want to applaud you for being the first Ghost Hunt story that made me cry. Thank you.

This was the most depressing Fan-fiction I have ever read. The only thing that has come close that I remember was a Pokemon Fic where Ash ends up hanging himself...

So sad! D: Could you do a little omake where John and Mai are reunited in heaven? Please? *Puppy dog eyes*