I have read this chapter loads of times and the ending always gets to be. SMILE

You’ve got someone Plagiarizing your story.
Name: Skigirl51
Story: Slytherin Princess

Hermione ends up in Slytherin. she makes friends with Draco who ends up calling her princess and having her over at the manor every Christmas and summer because her family hates her magic and she starts modeling for his mom and is excellent at potions and take private lessons from Snape and is a miniature healer for quidditch (even has the lake scene almost word for word where Dante gets attacked) and is loved by all Slytherins and Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws apologize to them for being biased.
I can’t even get past chapter 19 and it’s made me so mad I can’t stand it

I love commenting on this story all of the time.

Will you ever finish Rebel Malfoy, even though it hasn’t been updated I’m years?

I’m going to leave another comment. This is my favorite fanfic on this site and I am convinced that this is canon along with another fanfic that is my second favorite, titled: Hogwarts Rebellion. Despite writing errors that I fix inside my head when I read it over and over again, I can never get enough of this story. Probably because I can see great writing when I read it cause I am a compulsive fiction reader, and cause I am a bit of an idealist and love the second half of this fic with all of the inspirational quotes used. (I would love to help edit this work so the writing errors were no longer there, and more people would read it.)

I'm not sure if you'll ever read this because of how long it's been since you've posted this fic, but here goes: I read Slytherin's Potter in 4th or 5th grade which was maybe 5 or 6 years ago. I would have been 9 years old or so. I can't even fathom being that age anymore which is just a sign of how long this fic has been a part of my life, always lurking in the back of my mind. This story (along with another called Family Bonds by xXDesertRoseXx which I feel you may have mentioned at some point in an author's note or smth) is one of the first fics I've ever read and it was absolutely incredible for young me. Despite not having glanced at it in several years, I remember the names of most of the crew from Lily Luna's years at Hogwarts and most of the major plotlines. This fic has genuinely moved me at some points and the ending felt like saying goodbye to a precious family member. As a teenage guy in high school, I can honestly say that I learned what sex is from this story. It's amazing how you crafted a world from such a small amount of information (considering what little we knew about Next Gen in 2010). Your dedication to this fic is honestly inspiring. I know this review is all over the place, but I just wanted to get my thoughts out and tell you that this fic is as much a part of my childhood as actual Harry Potter and I love it with all my heart. I hope that you're doing well and this review makes you marginally happier. Feel free to PM me or anything if you want to, I would be happy to discuss this story or anything with you if you'd like.

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i thought lillys godsons name was theodore

What is up with the American slang? you do realize that Hogwarts is a British school, right? this felt more like a high school drama

Second or third time I have read this fanfic and omg, theres no way to describe how amazing you write, it was so heartfelt and made me feel the emotions of the characters,

You kean Theodore

I love your stories. They're fan-fucking-tastic. I have an idea. For a small fanfic. You see as an outtake or a left out part of Slytherin's Potter maybe you could write a small fanfic where grandma Weasley hoists a party at the Bottom urrow inviting the family after the Scorily marriage but before she conceives Mitchell and then Audrey Hugo and everyone else see how much in love Scorpius and Lily are and they teased Scorily and other pair and so on. I mean you get the idea. I really wish and hope that you right something like this. And don't forget that you're awesome.

I don't know what to say or how to express my feelings. I have over a hundred emotions running through me. All I can get myself to say is that you're a badass damn great magical writer. I hope with all my heart that u continue to write fanfictions on HP mainly the future generation. I wish you all the best and that you succeed in whatever you do. At last I thank you for gifting such a wonderful story and memorable one and thank you for letting me live and face my fears with Lily and Scorpius and everyone

This story is what I believed happened instead of that HORRIBLE plot of a play. This story really has that feel when I read to original HP books. I’m very immersed into the characters and I fall in love with them more than the magic. Just like the original HP books. Bloody fantastic!

i have read this story a million times. i started reading it as a freshmen in high school and finished it in 3 days. i always go back to this story and re read. i just recently graduated high school too. four years. i am just really sad that revel malloy hasn’t been updated :(

Your language suffered terribly in this chapter.