So Very Good! I am so sad that you abandoned the sequel! I hope you can find it in your heart to rejoin FanFic. Net and restart, continue, and finish the sequel!

The thing is Bobby’s theories about Reyna seemed too out of sudden, like a plot tool because there had been no indication for such a thing, especially about how Reyna might have liked Dakota but rejected him because he didn’t fit into her box or something. I think Bobby is overreaction for some reason, because the curse in the prophecy can also refer to Percy’s amnesia. So I ship percy with Reyna

I just started to ship Percy with Reyna. Please make them last

The thing is though, I don’t think Lupa has any greek form

Well at least I know what the ritual is, about a chapter to late to have much emotional impact tho

Ok so I’m only on chapter 11 but this chapter was to be blunt bad HOWEVER it could have been good IF YOU ACTUALLY TOLD US WHAT THE STUPID RITUAL WAS was because then you could actually know why the whole was so important there might have been hints but I sure as hell didn’t see them and this “ritual” was the focus of the ENTIRE CHAPTER and we don’t even know what it is so the chapter has no impact

This seems like a totally useless twist that a smut fic would use. I mean, wtf? A 15 year old girl? I don't get the purpose beyond adding extra (and unrealistic and unnecessary) angst. Who would even agree to it or see it as normal? It's so weird.

Where can I find the sequel

SEQUELLL !PLEASE!
PART TWO?

I don't know if you've handed off the sequel to someone else yet, but please tell us if you do. This story is too good to not have a resolution :(

A good story concept, it's too bad that the author had Percy's spine removed along with his memories.

Does posteriori refer to posterior?(medical term)

Honestly, while it's a great story, the troubles of having him still technically together with Annabeth and Reyna at the same time are grating on my nerves as I read this. In all honesty, I'd prefer he ended up with Reyna, because I don't tend to read Percy and Annabeth fan fictions(of which there are plenty), and so the only romance between them that I've actually read has been the original series. And we all know that RR can't write romance to save his life. So the original books actually managed to ruin the canon pairing for me, and this Reyna has made much more of an impression upon me. I was sort of hoping that they got together in the end. However, I guess I'll just have to see what happens in the second book. While I'm not entirely diverse to a multi pairing, it's definitely far from my favorite and I think that Reyna and Annabeth's personalities would clash far more often than not.

Wow... Master Bobby... THE BEST THING EVER! I laughed cookbook hard! XD

So er, is there any chance that we're ever going to see part 2? And if someone else has already adopted it, can you .what it's called? Amazing work on your entire story!