Really happy I didn't stop reading because of my dislike for Fang in the beginning. She has really grown on me since. I so want to finish the rest, but reading while at work is ~probably a bad idea :p. At least I have something to read tonight.

Holy hell I can't stand Fang. Is she as insufferable in the game as she is in this story?

I find it interesting how everyone who has had the opportunity to chime in (in one way or another) about their thoughts on this whole fiasco has immediately assumed that the entitre thing is Lighting's fault. I mean it kind of is, but at the same time it actually isn't her fault at all. And obviously they wouldn't have enough information to know that, but then the information they DO have isn't enough to give them any reasonable basis for instantly laying all the blame at Lightning's feet either. Vanille I guess makes sense, as she would first and foremost be protective of her sister. I was still glad when Light called her out on it, though. You can't just automatically assume Lightning is the villain, that's nonsense.

Oh wow yeah I loved this fanfic :D once I finish reading the FangRai on I'll look to ao3 and read the ones you have posted there :) and I'll definatly read the other ending tonight aswell. Just a really nice read and hard to put down.

Yay they made up :D

Ooo the next chapter is going to be really good I can tell :D

hi thank you ...sure hope this continues...3 :)

Hey I just wanted to say the first time I read this story I stayed up for it all night. Couldn't stop reading. You got a talent to keep the reader wanting to read more and to know how it goes on. So the open ending is a bit evil :D But yeah, all in all very good fanfic. It got even better when I read it for the second time.

everybody wants a piece of fang!

I wish i could kiss the ground you walk on. AMAZING.

I'm glad you fininshed it was an awesome take for the XIII story.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while since...chapter 9...yeesh.

Love the ending with a little Light and Serah but most importantly Light's dedication/love in saving Fang and Vanille once again and tackle the impossible.

Sad to see you leave this site (forever I guess). I'm glad to have read your story up until the end and I hope that you would return one day (impossible since you already said goodbye). So goodbye and continue the INCREDIBLE writing that you do on the other site! :D

After reading the sequel/conclusion on Archive Of Our Own, this is far and away one of my favorite Fang/Lighting stories. (:

Ugh, I want to marry your portrayal of characters. Loved this fic heaps. Thanks for all the hard effort.

An appropriate, and yes hopeful, ending. I have faith that someday in a sequel or just my imagination they will find each other again.

Very well-written. Congrats on a completed story! That sounds silly at first...but it's a major milestone not many ppl get to.