Okay I'll assume Molly Potter died since it otherwise it would be 5 Potters dreaming.

Your insistence on changing scenes from one paragraph to the next with no indication is so freaking confusing, and made worse by just using pronouns in the new scene. About the time you figure out whose pov it is you've changed scenes again. It does not make for smooth reading at all

God damn! I LOVED THIS... just like the first story. I also love the pairings... reading the next story now :)

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A very unique way to present effects of Harry's adventures.
my question is whether or not this would not lead to a clan of immortal Potters?
great writing.

A very unique way to present effects of Harry's adventures.
my question is whether or not this would not lead to a clan of immortal Potters?
great writing.

Great sequel! I don't know how you could write the blood and gore scenes. WOW!

Well, if that wasn't a cliff hanger.
Another good story.
Thanks.

Another fantastic story! This epilogue has me anxious for the next in this series.

This is good overall, but fairly dark, with Harry's and his friends early actions seemingly not reducing Voldemort's forces much. The survived killing curse basilisk phoenix tears phoenix blood makes human phoenix bit, is probably overkill. It could have been as the choice of the phoenix plus the last two and someone has to be on the brink of death. Voldemort's actions against St. Mugnos were curious, because it was just random destruction of magical blood, which might offend some of his followers. I'd have liked to seen Dumbledore redeem himself in some small way before the end, but that didn't really happen. At some point earlier in the story I thought there was a mention of a count pre-Slughorn, but I could be wrong. On a final note, I'd have preferred no cliffhanger in the Epilogue, though I understand why it was there. Still, after getting to the end here it was a bit like, "Something worse? Really?" It just felt like there should be a pause there. Again, overall good story, but perhaps a tad darker than I normally care for.

The biggest thing that stands out is the level of the attacks. Harry and the rest were systematically killing off death eaters in book one, and apparently in book two, yet they always seem to have plenty for another attack here.

I don't understand why Ally has been sacked.

Where's Molly?! I can't read the 29th chapter btw, something is wrong, I get directed to the front page.

my only real problem with the story is that you arent using the time trunk more , for everything from training to mini vacations for making sure everyone is well rested and healed at all times. for example. no reason daphne couldnt have been in the trunk to give the chest wound the required time to heal.

this story is really intense