Reviews for Against the Sky
Guest chapter 5 . 8/1
wow this is great. the fearless lyric just add to it
Sweetpotato16 chapter 1 . 4/8
Ever since the quarantine, I have been finding comfort from reading a ton of fanfic. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for writing this piece. We readers tend to forget just how much effort and time is being sacrificed to bring forth this quality of work. This appreciation comment is the least I can do to express my gratitude. Thank you dear author for the wonderful read, and keep up the good work! Keep safe always
ahyde17 chapter 5 . 3/24
Great story! Thanks for writing it!
ahyde17 chapter 4 . 3/24
Great chapter! Love your writing and their interactions in this chapter.
ahyde17 chapter 3 . 3/24
Another great chapter! It shows the hard job of being a medic nin that a lot of sakura haters seem to not realize.
ahyde17 chapter 2 . 3/24
Love how her summons were cats. Oh and what kakashi said at the end was great!
ahyde17 chapter 1 . 3/24
I liked this! Usually kakashi is depicted as abandoning sakura after naruto left and you doing it different is refreshing. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/29
I just want to say I agree with your opinion. A teenager and an adult is just NO. I also just realized this when I was 20.
In the Naruto universe, of course the culture there is different. Regardless, I want Kakashi and Sakura to be together when they're both adults
pearslandpendant chapter 5 . 11/22/2019
Beautiful!
mtnikolle chapter 5 . 10/18/2019
A very excellent story, and a very excellent closing note :)
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2019
So smooth!
happy everyday life chapter 5 . 12/16/2018
This chapter was absolutely beautiful! The part where Sakura calls out on Kakashi and his guilt if he were to become happy was spot-on. Kakashi saying he will try, was very much in character for a guy who refuses to get too close to anyone.

Regarding the A/N I agree. I also have a strong dislike for playboy/experienced Kakashi and innocent/virgin Sakura stories. I don't find older Kakashi seducing "pure" and "innocent" Sakura as sexy. It only looks like he is taking advantage of her. It's downright disgusting and disgraceful.

Anyways, thank you for this beautiful story!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/8/2018
This was a really good story, and good end disclaimer. I love this ship but i hate stumbling across ones where theres romantic undertones during the first days of that team. Those are uncomfortable af. This has really good development though! Like...a natural and healthy progression in the dynamic of their relationship
Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2017
It is amazing how you played their roles. Specially the sasuke part. She still had the sexy uchiha but choosed kakashi over him. I had such a good time reading it that i barely noticed the time xD you my dear writer made me late for work. But i loved it
Prowlin' Beast chapter 5 . 8/21/2017
Dear Nostalgic-Maiden;
Please regard this singular review for the whole story; upon reading this, I felt very pleased.

This was VERY nicely handled and well done.

The nuances you have in the character's behaviours-right down to their perception of each other-is excellently written and beautifully described.

Even though I'm not a "Naruto" fan, I found this enjoyable because it's done so tastefully; you clearly express everything that's going on, and don't have to take it into vulgar territory or use excessive or profanity. You fleshed out the PEOPLE aspect of the relationship, and how they worked through their personal perspectives, PLUS you didn't use the cheap and easy lure of sex as the defining element.

BRAVO!

While I ain't keen on the idea of a much older person being involved with a younger one, I do appreciate that you placed primary focus on how each person was dealing with their personal conflicts (I haveta say, she is one very mature teen, but this story's setting and time-frame are likely contributing factors with regard to that, to say nothing of the kind of life Sakura has lived, the environment/disciplines that shaped her.)

The Author's note at the end is a WONDERFUL addition, too! You're the ONLY person I have ever seen do that! *Applause* It was a poignant statement.

One thing?
I don't know if the use of portions of syndicated lyrics are permissible on the site. I'm pretty ignorant of copyright law, but I know this isn't a "song fic"...and since the lyrics are only snippets, I could be wrong here in assuming they may not belong. With regard to that, I welcome clarity and, if necessary, correction.

Other than that, this is EXACTLY how one handles an "M"-Rated story. Please, keep up the good work and be this example. Thank you, for writing and sharing. You have a lot of talent.

~~Prowl.
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