It hurts so much. My heart is crying. Inside, seeing as I can't cry. I just want to hug Cat. So beautiful.

It's always nice to read angsty stories once in a while, and this one was beautifully written.

I love this one shot. Like I really love this one shot. Maybe because it's so relatable. I am in love with my straight best friend. And it's killing me. So thank you for writing this. It's a piece of art.

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! I loved this so much! amazing! I cried the first time. I wanted to cry the second, the third, and the fourth! I've lost count of how many times I've read it. It's by far my favorite one-shot I have ever read.

Really good!

Wow,that was really deep.I actually startred crying.I realised that i am just like Cat.I always say things that make no makes ma really in love with a girl I cant have.I dont know what to I should do the same as let it just happy to have expirienced love.

Kinda reminds me of Cinderpelt(Cat) and Fireheart(Jade).

wow it was depressing but sometimes its good to read something different

I HATE THIS OH MY GOD IT IS SO GOOD WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS?

You could make a sequel to this telling how jade feels about cat's suicide, either finding out or already knowing how cat feels about her

God, my emotions.

I've read this story a few times now and with each time I re-read this, I fall even more in love with it.

It's just so beautiful...

Whoa... Intense. Unrequited love at its finest- and darkest.

i hate how sad this made me :(

This sucks cameldicks. Just because it ends in a cliffhanger.

I loved all the angst and emotion of this oneshot!